Some feedback on the core 2.0 document

[Ernst Jan van Nigtevecht <EJvN@Sonnenglanz.net>]

Hi,

Please find attached some feedback on
"dss-core-v2.0-wd01-2016-06-26.docx". (I have used LibreOffice, they
layout is a bit ruined, so don't use it further!!).

** I have made pdf versions of the pages that I have changed. I did not
yet go through the whole document (it's a lot!)... **

Hope it helps a bit in separating the generic semantics and specific
mappings to xml or json.

Regards

Ernst Jan

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