Re: [dss] Groups - oasis-dss-1.0-profiles-pws-spec-wd-02.doc uploaded

[Trevor Perrin <trevp@trevp.net>]

At 03:57 PM 3/22/2004 +0000, you wrote:

>The document oasis-dss-1.0-profiles-pws-spec-wd-02.doc has been submitted 
>by Paul Madsen (p.madsen@entrust.com) to the OASIS Digital Signature 
>Services TC document repository.

Some minor editorial comments:

  - The footer at the bottom of the page seems to take up more space than 
it should.
  - You can trim the contributors list, if you want (just yourself should 
be fine).
  - You could combine the 1st and 2nd pages
  - section 1.2 could be trimmed, since you have no schema file, at least 
at the moment.
  - In section 2.2, you can remove the bracketed [s]


Trevor