Re: [dss] some final polishing of WD40 (the first 50% up to line 1088)

Subject: Re: [dss] some final polishing of WD40 (the first 50% up to line 1088)

On 3/20/06, Konrad Lanz <Konrad.Lanz@labs.cio.gv.at> wrote:

Hi Stefan, Nick, JC, Ed and all

Some point Most of the things are for a final cleanup, what however
concerns me is that some result codes have gone missing since WD37.

I hope that's it and we are done.

best regards
Konrad

P.S.: Ed and JC: please look at lines 1050ff  for "shall" SHALL and
"should" SHOULD.

some final polishing for
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/dss/download.php/17296/oasis-dss-1.0-core-spec-wd-40.pdf

* Lines 337 - 338 should probably be under <InlineXML> (i.e move 15
lines further down).
* Line 357: shouldn't we have a reference for MimeType.
* Lines 358 and 359 could be suppressed.
* All schema fragments, Eg. Lines 376 - 395, 800 - 806: harmonize the
indention (always use 2 or 4 spaces, don't mix) and synchronize with the
schema file.
* Section 2.6: I think some result codes have gone missing.
* Lines 637 - 639 refers to result minor NotSupported however this one
has gone missing (well have to define
urn:oasis:names:tc:dss:1.0:resultminor:NotSupported in 2.6 or there).
* Remove several empty lines e.g 136, 276, 322, 360, 418, 497, 564, 569,
588, 599, 603, 606, 613, 617, 620, 628, 723, 747, 770, 777, 780, 782,
898, 914, 917, 931, 1069, 1074  etc ... Use line spacing where extra
space between lines is necessary.
* Line 852 The reference should be "section 2.1 Well-Formed XML
Documents [XML 1.0 (Second Edition)]"
(http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml/#sec-well-formed ) instead of [Schema1].
* Line 872: correct the alignment: I think this can be done by pressing
ALT+Enter, Shift+Enter or Tab after the dot.
* Line 875: What Requester Error? --> again :
urn:oasis:names:tc:dss: 1.0:resultminor:MoreThanOneRefUriOmitted missing
or to be defined there?
* Line 930: again :
urn:oasis:names:tc:dss:1.0:resultminor:NotParseableXMLDocument missing
or to be defined there?

* Line 979 - 981:
The <SignRequest> should contain either a single <Document> not having
RefURI,
RefType set or a single <DocumentHash> not having RefURI, RefType,
<ds:Transforms> set:
--> replace should with MUST.

Add a subsection and add some prose:
3.4.1 Process Variant for <DocumentHash>
1.
     a. omitted.
     b. omitted.
     c. omitted.
     d. omitted.
     e. omitted.
2.
    same as in 3.4
3.
    same, but <DocumentHash> is incompatible with  <IncludeEContent>
hence the signature has to be external/detached/"without eContent".

* Line 1030 supply a reference for [DSS XAdES profile]
* Lines 1050, 1053, 1060, 1066, 1067, 1084: Question for JC and ED is
this "shall" a SHALL?
* Lines 1063: Question for JC and ED is this "should" a SHOULD?
* Line 1067 Add a reference for [XAdES]
* Line 1082: Question for JC and ED is this "must" a MUST?

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