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Subject: Minor updates to Core W44
Stefan and all in DSS: I note the following minor updates to the DSS Core WD44: 1) Front Page Email addresses are NOT needed for the editor / contributors (apologies for confusion from prev comment) 2) Line 263 Change last sentence: ""Manifest validation is supported by the Core" to: "Manifest validation is supported by an optional input / output." This is misleading as whilst it is defined as part of the core optional input/outputs are optional. As stated in 1.3 " Profiles of these protocols can pick and choose which optional inputs and outputs to support, ...". Also, the description of manifest validation talks about Core validation implying this is different. 3) line 266 In "It contains an XML document as specified in section 2.4.2." Delete "XML" as 2.4.2 defines how this element can be used for binary documents. 4) Line 320 "The server MUST use the schemas to identify the ID attributes ....." This might be taken to imply that schemas need always be used for ID attributes, Which is not always the case. Suggest add at start of sentence: "If prsent, the server MUST ......" Also add the same sentence as in 2.8.5 as a note. "Note: It is recommended to use xml:id as defined in [xml:id] as id in the payload being referenced by a <ds:Reference>, because the schema then does not have to be supplied for identifying the ID attributes." 5) Line 466 Change "see section 1 [XPATH]" to "see section 1 of [XPATH]" 6) Line 1016 Change "<IncludeEContent>" to "optional input <IncludeEContent> (see 3.5.7)" 7) Line 1050 Reword "create and embed a timestamp token into an existing signature, WITHOUT VERIFICATION, which ......" 8) Line 1174 It needs to be explicetly stated that there may be mulitple occurences (see line 639. Add "There may be multiple occurences of this optional input." 9) Line 1560 Replace title in line with following sub-sections "Processing for RFC 3161 Timestamp tokens on CMS Signatutes" 10) Line 1642 1643 "Result Codes" Section This section adds nothing and seems out of place here. Delete Also, all the refences to 4.5 and 4.6.x will require updating. 11) Line 1984, 1985 This should reference 3.5.2.1 to 3.5.2.3. 12) Line 2288 Change "eg." To "Consider for example" 13) Annex C Revision history needs updating 14) In notice that parts of the documents is set to a range of languages. It should all by US english. Nick
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