[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]
Subject: FW: Minor Comments
Forwarding minor comments from Konrad -----Original Message----- From: Konrad Lanz [mailto:Konrad.Lanz@iaik.tugraz.at] Sent: 11 July 2006 12:13 To: Nick Pope; Juan Carlos Cruellas Subject: Minor Comments Hi Nick and Juan Carlos, my colleague Harald Bratko thankfully invested some time to read the core protocol and I'd like to communicate some feedback from his review. pls see below, sorry they are just very quick Notes. Change [XMLSIG] to [XMLDSIG]. 311 - 315: Make a forward reference to <Schema>. 344 - 345: Make a Note that ignorePIs and ignoreComments applies to the complete Document not just to the parts before and after the document element. 1436: An omitted <SignatureObject> in this sentence is not very clear. better would be: Either a <SignaturePtr> or a single <InputDocument> and no <SignatureObject> MUST be used ... 1464, 1467: Font of <SignaturePtr>, <Base64XML>, <EscapedXML> is not consistent. Line 314: forward reference to <Schema> 1679: Add a sentence like: The <VerifyManifestResults> is comprised of one or more <ManifestResult>s that contain the following: 1785: Change the words "signing key" against "signature". These following things could be dealt with in the public review. 1848: The text is misleading. --> Eg. CA is trustworthy. 1852: One of the certificates in the chain is revoked 1856: What is a certifying Signature? * ProcessingDetail the following would need to be added: ReferenceHashInvalid SignatureValueInvalid Processing detail should give ds:Reference Level output just as ManifestResult does. -- Konrad Lanz, IAIK/SIC - Graz University of Technology Inffeldgasse 16a, 8010 Graz, Austria Tel: +43 316 873 5547 Fax: +43 316 873 5520 https://www.iaik.tugraz.at/aboutus/people/lanz http://jce.iaik.tugraz.at Certificate chain (including the EuroPKI root certificate): https://europki.iaik.at/ca/europki-at/cert_download.htm
[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]