RE: [ebcore] Changes Required to Submitted Document ~ ebCore-PartyIdType-1.0 Committee Draft 03

["Pim van der Eijk" <pvde@sonnenglanz.net>]

Hi Kim,

 

Yes, please ignore whatever version you had in JIRA and use the updated version.

 

Pim 

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From: Kim Goolsby [mailto:kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org]
Sent: 19 August 2010 23:48
To: Pim van der Eijk
Cc: ebcore@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: Re: [ebcore] Changes Required to Submitted Document ~ ebCore-PartyIdType-1.0 Committee Draft 03

Hi Pim,

The old version is attached to TCADMIN-224; that's the one I checked.  In your attached file, all changes are made. Since I'm new to this, I'll ask: Shouldn't this attached file replace the one in JIRA? In any case, yes, this spec is fine. Thanks much for letting me know. 

Best,

Kim

On Thu, Aug 19, 2010 at 5:37 PM, Pim van der Eijk <pvde@sonnenglanz.net> wrote:

I'm sorry Kim, but did you download the latest version of the ZIP file from:

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ebcore/download.php/39046/cd03.zip

 

That version does not seem to have any of the issues you report on below.

 

It looks like you have reviewed (a second time) the latest but one version from:

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ebcore/download.php/38800/cd03.zip

 

The Kavi page of all versions of this document is:

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ebcore/document.php?document_id=39046

You need to download the latest updated version.

 

Pim

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From: Kim Goolsby [mailto:kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org]
Sent: 19 August 2010 22:06
To: ebcore@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [ebcore] Changes Required to Submitted Document ~ ebCore-PartyIdType-1.0 Committee Draft 03

TCADMIN-224

Please make the following changes to this document: 

1. In the 'This Version' section, the underlying links are incorrect. Please change them from CD02 to CD03. 

2. Also in 'This Version', the html file has an extra 'x'. Please change from 'xhtml' to 'html'. 

3. In 'Previous Version', the html file has an extra 'x'. Please change from 'xhtml' to 'html'. 

4. In 'Related Work', the links do not go directly to the documents. For OASIS ebXML Messaging Services (ebMS) Version 2.0, please change the link to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/ebxml-msg/documents/ebMS_v2_0.pdf. 

5. In 'Related Work', the links do not go directly to the documents. For OASIS ebXML Messaging Services (ebMS) Version 3.0 Part 1: Core Features, please change the link to http://docs.oasis-open.org/ebxml-msg/ebms/v3.0/core/ebms_core-3.0-spec.pdf. 

Suggestion: You can remove the period at the end of this list item. 

6. In 'Related Work', the links do not go directly to the documents. For OASIS Collaboration-Protocol Profile and Agreement (CPP/A) Technical Specification Version 2.0, please change the link to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/ebxml-cppa/documents/ebcpp-2.0.pdf. 

Suggestion: You can remove the period at the end of this list item. 

7. In 'Related Work', the links do not go directly to the documents. For OASIS Universal Business Language (UBL) Version 2.0, please change the link to http://docs.oasis-open.org/ubl/cs-UBL-2.0/UBL-2.0.html. 

8. In 'Non-normative References', the link for [EBMS2] does not go directly to the document. Please change from http://www.oasis-open.org/specs/#ebxmlmsgv2 to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/ebxml-msg/documents/ebMS_v2_0.pdf. 

9. In 'Non-normative References', the link for [EBMS3CORE] does not go directly to the document. Please change from http://www.oasis-open.org/specs/#ebxmlmsgv3 to http://docs.oasis-open.org/ebxml-msg/ebms/v3.0/core/ebms_core-3.0-spec.pdf. 

Thank you,

Kim

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Publications Specialist
OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for the information society
email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org 
web: www.oasis-open.org
phone: 1.734.223.6890