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Tony:
I have
accepted all of the outstanding changes in the Word document before applying my
new changes. They include:
- Make
minor change to errata URL to be consistent with version numbering
convention.
- Update examples to make CPP and CPA version
attributes to correspond to schema version.
- Clarify spec and schema versioning
convention.
- Update meaning of version attribute under
CollaborationProtocolProfile.
- Update meaning of version attribute under
CollaborationProtocolAgreement.
- Remove id attribute under CollaborationRole to be
consistent with schema.
- Make
EncryptionAlgorithm a sub-element of TransportClientSecurity and
TransportServerSecurity, instead of a sub-element of TransportSecurityProtocol
(in order to be consistent with schema).
- Reference RFC 2822 instead of RFC 822 (I could not
locate your related changes).
- Clarify that the NamespaceSupported element has a
required location attribute and an implied version
attribute.
- Replace contents of appendices A through D with
latest examples and schema (done with change tracking suppressed to avoid
increasing the file size unnecessarily).
- Remove old highlighted comments by deleting comments
with change tracking suppressed.
- Remove all wildcard elements from Appendix D
introduction and schema, those that have not been explicitly described in the
body of the specification.
- Remove empty lines in table entries in Appendix
G.
- Miscellaneous editorial
changes.
- Regenerate Table of Contents after all editorial
changes.
Please
review and possibly accept these changes before generating and posting a PDF
version of the spec at the TC web site. You may also want to generate an
initially empty errata page to make the hyperlink in the document
valid.
Thanks,
-Arvola
A preview of CPPA version 1.11 is attached. Arvola will finalize
version 1.11 with further changes to be distributed shortly.
Changes so far include:
- Added link for version 2.0 errata
- Removed sentence on capitalization of 2119 and other
keywords (at Marty's suggestion).
- Added brief section sanctioning CPA templates
(Section 7.3).
- Added sentence to section 8.4.1 introducing (currently
invalid) link to William Kammerer's forthcoming document on URI values of
the PartyId element's type attribute.
- Implemented agreed resolution of issue 142, deleteing
the offending sentence in Section 9.12 and modifying the preceding sentence
accordingly.
- Applied Dale's text on EncryptionAlgorithm
element under TransportSecurityProtocol, updated wrt subsequent discussion
- Applied Dale's SMTP changes (for Cliff Collins'
observations)
- Applied Dale's Rewrite of the NamespaceSupported text
passages
Addred reference to TLS Protocol; removed
work in progress comment under SSL reference.
- Replaced reference for RFC 822 with RFC 2822.
- Text referring to BPSS spec for meaning of
isConfidential attribute (MAY want to remove more surrounding text as a
result).
- Applied Peter Ogden's changes for issue 245
- Applied numerous changes sent privately by
Arvola on March 27: mostly editorial, but includes change to multiple
ds:Reference elements per ProcessSpecification.
- Introduced styles for Appendix 2, 3, and
4 and applied them to subsections of Appendix E.
- Converted some hard-coded section references to
MS Word cross-references.
- Miscellaneous editorial fixes.
Cheers,
Tony
Weida
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