RE: [ebxml-cppa] Errata draft

[Martin Sachs <msachs@cyclonecommerce.com>]

Yes, that's the general idea. However, it might be less confusing to
write it as:  line 3583
should be " yyy" . Repeating
the error text may add to confusion.

Regards,
Marty


At 11:11 AM 5/28/2003 -0700, Dale Moberg wrote:

OK, that sounds like it might be less subject to confusion...
 
I could add something like
 
line 3583 was "yeyy" but should be " yyy"
line 4086 was "xexx" "xxx"
 
Is that what you propose in the last sentence?
 
Dale

-----Original Message-----

From: Martin Sachs

Sent: Wednesday, May 28, 2003 11:08 AM

To: Dale Moberg

Cc: ebxml-cppa@lists.oasis-open.org

Subject: Re: [ebxml-cppa] Errata draft

I have some suggestions for improvement of the erratum text.

I believe that the current text may confuse people because it implies that the error is on all four lines whereas lines 3675 and 4136 are actually correct.

I suggest the following revised text:

1. The string values for the ReceiptAcknowledgment action on lines 3583 and  4086 should all be spelled "ReceiptAcknowledgment" in order to agree with lines 3675 and 4136. These action attributes have paths /CollaborationProtocolProfile/PartyInfo/Collaboration-Role/ServiceBinding/CanSend/ThisPartyActionBinding/@action and /CollaborationProtocolProfile/PartyInfo/CollaborationRole/ServiceBinding/-CanReceive/ThisPartyActionBinding/@action.

It might be even better to show the complete lines 3583 and 4086 in the erratum text.

Regards,
Marty

At 02:51 PM 5/27/2003 -0700, Dale Moberg wrote:

Hi,

I am enclosing a draft of language for the first errata to CPPA v.2 that
corrects values in the sample CPPs for Company
A and Company B. This was the "ReceiptAcknowledgment" issue.

The other potential errata comment was about a dangling link. I have
asked the webmaster to put a blank page at the party_id link until the
TC has decided what to do with our current party_id draft and current
ECOM issue (recently forwarded by Yukinori Saito).

We will discuss the party_id maintenance issue at our next meeting, June
13.

These were the errata discussed and resolved at the March face to face
meeting in San Diego.

Thanks,

Dale Moberg

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Martin Sachs
standards architect
Cyclone Commerce
msachs@cyclonecommerce.com

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Martin Sachs
standards architect
Cyclone Commerce
msachs@cyclonecommerce.com