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Comment/Issue
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Suggested change
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Priority
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General
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Difficult to find things
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Add page number/ section numbers/ contents
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Final edit issue
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Page 3 / Messaging Overview
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“The ebMS was developed to provide for secure”
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Change “for” to “the”
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Low
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Page 3 / Messaging Overview
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Support for FTP is not widespread
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Remove “FTP”
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Medium
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Page 4 / Overview
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Message exchange patterns. Need to reference
multiple exchange patterns – this is referenced in the later section but
needs higher priority
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Change to be “Multiple message exchange
patterns including push and pull that map to different type of business
transactions.”
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Medium
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Page 4 / Last section
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Multi-hop may not be supported in version 3.0
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Remove last sentence from paragraph.
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High
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Page 5 / after V3.0 before Business scenario
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Add the list of referenced specs for V3.0. This may
be moved form Page 4 Overview
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Add The following spec. references
WS-I Basic Profile, WS-I attachment profile (Jacques what exactly
is this called?), WS-Security, WS-Reliability…
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Low
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General
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We need to come up with a cover page that has some
impact but is simple to understand
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Add a cover with the title of ebXML Technical
overview with a jigsaw with each piece labelled with an ebXML component
between to buildings or such like.
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Low – Final edit
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