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Subject: Re: [ebxml-msg] ebXML Message Service Specification
It isn't necessary to do so. The Transform(s) are treated as a unix pipe (output of one is the input to the next in lexical sequence). Cheers, Chris David Fischer wrote: > OK, I am confused. How do we put the REC-xpath... algorithm and the > REC-xml-c14... canonicalization algorithm on the same Transform? > > Regards, > > David. > > -----Original Message----- > From: Arvola Chan [mailto:arvola@tibco.com] > Sent: Thursday, October 25, 2001 7:45 PM > To: ebXML Msg > Subject: Re: [ebxml-msg] ebXML Message Service Specification > > > David: > > Please see the attached Word document for the contexts of the following > comments. > > Regards, > -Arvola > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > ---- > > Figure 1 needs to be put into the same format as other figures in this > specification. The current figure seems to have very poor resolution. Also, > the box labelled "Authentication,authorization and repudiation services" > should be renamed "Authentication, Authorization and Non Repudiation > Services". > > Incorrect figure number. > > We use the prefix SOAP-ENV to represent the SOAP namespace in the examples, > but use the soap:prefix in the schema. Should we make these uniform? Should > I change the schema to use SOAP-ENV instead of soap? > > The TimeToLive element may be specified for a Best-Effort message. The > corresponding semantics need to be explained in this section. > > Strike this out in accordance with Marty's suggestion regarding the use of > RFC2119 keywords. > > The ';' is extraneous. Should mechanism be plural? > > Since you are adding the canonicalization transform, doesn't that raise the > total number of transforms to 3? > > This paragraph seems to be left over from an earlier version of the spec. It > is no longer quite relevant because (1) TraceHeaderList is now a sub-element > of Via and (2) the Acknowledgment element targeted for the next MSH will > also be excluded by the transform. > > If this transform is always used, then one intermediary can never return a > meaningfully signed (intermediate) Acknowledgment to another, because such > an intermediate Acknowledgment will have an actor attribute value equal to > the nextMSH and therefore be excluded from the signature. > > The third ds:Transform. > > The result of this transform is to canonicalize... > > Why are you combining the XPath transform with the canonicalization > transform? In the 1.0 spec, an algorithm of > "http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/REC-xpath-19991116" was used for the XPath > transform. > > The spelling of soap needs to be in uppercase to be consistent with the rest > of this example. > > This section should explain how a delivery channel is selected for a given > error condition. > > This restriction seems unnecessarily severe. A DR may be piggybacked on a > business message that asks for DR. The restriction should be applicable only > when a DR message is sent on its own. > > The two sentences in this paragraph contradict each other. Some rephrasing > is necessary. > > This part of the sentence is kind of circular. Suggest rephrasing as: > "Reliable Messaging defines an interoperable protocol such that two Message > Service Handlers (MSH) can reliably exchange messages using acknowledgment, > retry, and duplicate detection and elimination mechanisms, resulting in the > To Party receiving the message Once-And-Only-Once. > > This overview should mention duplicate elimination as a component of > reliable messaging. > > This restriction should only be applicable when an Acknowledgment message is > sent on its own, not being piggybacked on a business response message. > > I don't think it is appropriate to reference a subsection within another > optional module. > > Will there be retries if the AckRequested element is not present? > > I am not sure if the Retries parameter should govern retries due to > communication errors. In the RosettaNet Implementation Framework, retries of > PIP actions due to the non receipt of acknowledgment is distinct from > retries due to communication failure. > > This sentence is problematical. The behavior described below should only be > exhibited by a Receiving MSH when it is the toPartyMSH! > > I think the pointer should be to section 7.5.3. > > This discussion really belongs in section 7.5.3. > > This should always be true because the antecedant in item 2 above is: "If > the message is not a duplicate". > > This discussion belongs in section 7.5.3. > > The format of the Heading 2 paragraph style needs to be adjusted (globally) > to provide more spacing between the section number and the section title. > The attribute value "hanging" needs to be increased. It was not meant to > deal with a document with so many sections. > > duplicateElimination is an attribute of QualityOfServiceInfo. > > This statement is not true for a Best-Effort multi-hop message. There will > not be an AckRequested element in such a message. > > Is being returned? > > We need to make sure that the CPP/A can model these combinations. > > The format of the Heading 1 app paragraph style needs to be adjusted > (globally) to provide more spacing between the appendix label and the > appendix title. > > I suggest that this sentence be struck out. The schema must be in sync with > the specification because implementers will directly use the schema in their > implementations. > > -----Original Message----- > From: David Fischer <david@drummondgroup.com> > To: ebXML Msg <ebxml-msg@lists.oasis-open.org> > Date: Thursday, October 25, 2001 7:18 AM > Subject: [ebxml-msg] ebXML Message Service Specification > > > I have been trying to capture the editorial comments as they come in. We > are > starting to get duplicates which indicates it is time to put out a new > version. > Tracking is on and Arvola's schema has been inserted. > > Regards, > > David Fischer > Drummond Group. > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------- > To subscribe or unsubscribe from this elist use the subscription > manager: <http://lists.oasis-open.org/ob/adm.pl> >
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