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Subject: RE: [ebxml-msg] Groups - Modified Proposed Agenda
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The following is a modified agenda from the one sent by Ian. I propose
the following: 1) Vote CD2 on Draft 12 modulo three editorial changes (changes
described in (a), (b), and (c)). Pete would then release CD2 one day after (on Thursday April 13) with changes (a), (b) and (c)
incorporated. One week after CD 2 vote (April 19), we vote CD3 and submission
for public review at the same time. 2) Discuss the following changes AFTER
CD2 vote: (a)
Replace throughtout
the draft all occurences of "mpflow" with "mpf". mpflow
makes emphasis on the word "flow", whereas emphasis, if ever made, should
be on the word "partition" not "flow". To be all neutral, "mpf"
should be used. Besides, the schema is using "mpf" not "mpflow". (b)
On Line 2150 (page 53,
Error Handling Module), the attribute "origin" is optional not
required. The only attribute that is required is rather "errorCode". (c)
One page 42, I gave
an example of a "Response User Message". The example does not contain
the element "CollaborationInfo". This was done on purpose because I
strongly believe that many Response User Messages do not need that element. However,
after a debate with Dale who badly wants the element CollaborationInfo, the
only temporary solution that could suit both parties (Dale and I) is to have
the CollaborationInfo with empty action and service elements. Action Item: insert a collaborationInfo
element in the example listing a “Response User Message”, but have
the action and service elements be emplty (something like <Service/><Action/>), and at
the end of the example, we should add a sentence staying that action and
service elements MAY be empty for a Response User Message. (d)
This one is minor
but stronly desirable (at least for me): the table of contents show 4 levels. I
suggest to show only 3 levels (for example 5.2.1.1 thoughout 5.2.1.13 should not
be shown. Also if Pete could use Verdana 10 point or Verdana 9 point for the
body text of the draft, that would be better than the arial font. (e)
On page 10, the
table should be ajusted (the column "Prefix" should be made shorter
in order for the namespaces in the second column to show on one line only). (f)
Figure 5 on page 18
need more details. First if we could find another drawing representation for
the mpf (other than the pipe tube), that would be better. Second, the last use
case where MSH J and MSH K are pulling messages from MSH G using the same mpf, this
use-case is a little special and needs more explanation (it is not possible
unless both MSH J and MSH K are serving the same action, service, and To
parties). (g)
Section 3.1 (page 21),
I renamed P-Mode.protocol to P-Mode.channel on draft 9 that I wrote myself, but
now it is renamed back to P-Mode.protocol. The reason
I prefer the name P-Mode.channel is because I had included the MEP parameter in
it. We all know now that the MEP is part
of a P-Mode. However section 3.1 does not talk about it in the P-Mode
parameters. I suggest to add MEP within the P-Mode.protocol
and rename back P-Mode.protocol to P-Mode.channel. (h)
Figure 7 on page 24
need to change as it shows pipes (tubes) instead of mpf. Another figure will be
suggested and sent out to Pete. (i)
Lines from 954 to 976
should all be removed (they say nothing special). (j)
Lines 1047 to 1052
should be removed (we don't use the XML id attribute in ebMS-e packaging
anymore). (k)
Remove from the
draft all occurences of words such as TBD, EdNote (example page 33, line 1061
for TBD, and page 39 line 1368 for "EdNode"). A voted CD should not
have these words. (l)
Reformat the error
tables on pages 56, 57: Instead of having one big table that takes the whole
width of the page where third column (Description and semantics) become short
and text within it does not look nicley, it is better to split it into smaller
tables. For each error, a small table with the following layout: Error Code: EBMS:0001 Short Description: bla bla Recommended Severity: bla bla Category Value: bla bla Description or Semantics: bla bla 3) Adjuct - conformance 4) A.O.B. OASIS symposium meeting 5) Part 2 Hamid. |
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