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Subject: EML Implementation Guide
John, This looks like a good paper. I am wondering whether it is a bit long as an introduction, or rather short as a detailed implementation guide. It seems closer to the former, in which case I think I would take out the rather busy diagrams. I have less detailed versions if you think something is needed. In this case, I might move the Terminology section later as well. In terms of detail, at an editorial level, I would remove the "eg"s and use words like "such as" instead. CORE was also renamed a while ago as the Co-ordinated Online Record (not Register) of Electors. Regards Paul Spencer Director Boynings Consulting Ltd http://boynings.co.uk
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