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Subject: Re: [election-services] OASIS NIST UOCAVA Submission
David, That's fine, use only what you think improves the text. I tried to keep the original meaning as I understood it. In the example you give, the original text I was working from had "influence" in quotes: Since democracy was invented people have sought to "influence" the result of a vote Quoting is often imprecise and in this case I thought it eluded to improper influence. I removed the quotes and attempted to make the meaning explicit. Rich On 07/24/2010 03:26 PM, David RR Webber (XML) wrote: 20100724132607.dc066b1d4d2e0a1a65719ae85a8071e6.9c1b341287.wbe@email00.secureserver.net" type="cite"> |
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