Fwd: CAP 1.0 edits

[Art Botterell <acb@incident.com>]

Forwarding for the record this note received recently.  - Art

>Subject: CAP 1.0 edits
>Date: Mon, 6 Sep 2004 15:01:39 -0500
>From: "Todd Enneking" <TEnneking@Cleo.com>
>To: <acb@incident.com>
>
>This is an excellent document and protocol. We 
>are in the process of reviewing our support for 
>CAP within our Communications products (mass 
>messaging via voice, fax, e-mail with RSVP 
>capability, etc.).
>
>During my review of the CAP 1.0 standard, I 
>found a few anomalies that I wanted to point 
>out. You may have already received these and are 
>simply waiting for enough real changes prior to 
>releasing a new version. But in case you haven't 
>identified all of these, here they areŠ
>
>Page 1:
>The sentence "To subscribe, send an email 
>message to 
>emergency-comment-request@lists.oasis-open.org 
>with the word "subscribe" as the body of the 
>message." Should be changed to "To subscribe, 
>send an email message to 
>subscribe@lists.oasis-open.org with an empty 
>subject and body of the message.".
>
>Page 3, section 1.2:
>"though" should be changed to "through".
>
>Page 15:
>In the following sentence "not" should be 
>changed to "no":  "(2) If this item is not 
>provided, each recipient is free to set its own 
>policy as to when the message is not longer in 
>effect.".
>
>Page 19:
>In the following sentence "altitude" should be 
>changed to "ceiling":  "(2) The altitude measure 
>is in feet above mean sea level (per WGS-84 
>datum).".
>
>Page 20:
>"WGS 84" should be changed to "WGS-84".
>
>
>
>Todd Enneking
>Vice President, Engineering & IT
>Cleo Communications / Streem Communications
><mailto:TEnneking@cleo.com>TEnneking@cleo.com
>815-282-7655
>