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Subject: [emergency-msg] Review of CAP Issue #19
ISSUE: 18 - Minor editorial corrections DESCRIPTION: The commenter proposes several editorial corrections. PROPOSED CHANGE: The commenter suggests: >Page 1: >The sentence "To subscribe, send an email message to >email@example.com >with the word "subscribe" as the body of the >message." Should be changed to "To subscribe, >send an email message to >firstname.lastname@example.org with an empty >subject and body of the message.". > >Page 3, section 1.2: >"though" should be changed to "through". > >Page 15: >In the following sentence "not" should be >changed to "no": "(2) If this item is not >provided, each recipient is free to set its own >policy as to when the message is not longer in >effect.". > >Page 19: >In the following sentence "altitude" should be >changed to "ceiling": "(2) The altitude measure >is in feet above mean sea level (per WGS-84 >datum).". > >Page 20: >"WGS 84" should be changed to "WGS-84". DISCUSSION: All of these changes seem appropriate. RECOMMENDATION: Apply the suggested changes.