Rewrite of Section 1.3--Issue 9 (on IssuesList from start)

[Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com>]

Hi Folks,

Rather than pick and choose which Issues to add into the next 
Revision of the Committee Draft-Public Review document, I'm just 
going to do everything that I can do if there are resolution 
instructions, so the first relatively major piece of work was Issue 
9. I pulled it out of the document in order to send it to you to 
review. I suggest noting your suggestions and bringing them up in the 
next meeting (next Tuesday, the day after the Labor Day holiday).

I tried to summarize the structure, making sure that all the major 
elements and their purposes appear in the numbered items with as many 
of the subelements as seemed to be needed for understanding the scope 
and the structure, e.g. the way the message elements are organized in 
Figure 2.

The balance between listing everything (too much) and citing only the 
major elements (too little) is not easy.

Have a great holiday,
Rex
-- 
Rex Brooks
President, CEO
Starbourne Communications Design
GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
Berkeley, CA 94702
Tel: 510-898-0670

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