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Subject: Re: Update: Re: [emergency-msg] Please check Section 3.11.3


Hi Folks,

I decided to include EDXL-HAVE in the Notices 
section, but other than that, and changing the 
version number to 014, I will upload the version 
for the TC to review momentarily.

Cheers,
Rex

At 5:43 PM -0800 1/27/08, Rex Brooks wrote:
>HI folks,
>
>I thought I would give you and update and my 
>Notes--all 4 pages (though 1.25 or so is a paste 
>from a technical styling source reference). I 
>will take another last look at it in the morning 
>before I upload it. I went over the whole thing 
>with a very fine-tooth comb, back-to-back 
>looooong days, and I have one version which I 
>can upload, the redline version of that, and 
>another version with suggested stylistic 
>consistency plus the standard edits. We have 
>some decisions we can choose to make, or defer 
>since this is, after all, a Public Review draft.
>
>Thanks to all!
>Rex
>
>At 1:37 PM -0800 1/27/08, Rex Brooks wrote:
>>Hi Folks,
>>
>>Please check bullets 7 and 8 of Section 3.11.3. 
>>They repeat each other and somewhat contradict 
>>each other. I'm not going to stop or change it 
>>since this is taking longer than I thought it 
>>would. I'm keeping a page of notes on things 
>>that I think need to be looked over but this is 
>>the first one that actually caused me to stop 
>>long enough to send out a message about it. I 
>>have incorporated everyone else's proofing, so 
>>if you find anything, please keep a list and 
>>check the next version I post against your 
>>list, since it would not be a good idea for me 
>>to stop and rewind now that I'm going through 
>>it in great detail.
>>
>>
>>Cheers,
>>Rex
>>--
>>Rex Brooks
>>President, CEO
>>Starbourne Communications Design
>>GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
>>Berkeley, CA 94702
>>Tel: 510-898-0670
>>
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>Rex Brooks
>President, CEO
>Starbourne Communications Design
>GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
>Berkeley, CA 94702
>Tel: 510-898-0670
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>Attachment converted: Macintosh 
>HD:NotesOnFinalEdit-01-28-08.doc (NO%F/«IC») 
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--
Rex Brooks
President, CEO
Starbourne Communications Design
GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
Berkeley, CA 94702
Tel: 510-898-0670


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