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Subject: Re: Update: Re: [emergency-msg] Please check Section 3.11.3
Hi Folks, I decided to include EDXL-HAVE in the Notices section, but other than that, and changing the version number to 014, I will upload the version for the TC to review momentarily. Cheers, Rex At 5:43 PM -0800 1/27/08, Rex Brooks wrote: >HI folks, > >I thought I would give you and update and my >Notes--all 4 pages (though 1.25 or so is a paste >from a technical styling source reference). I >will take another last look at it in the morning >before I upload it. I went over the whole thing >with a very fine-tooth comb, back-to-back >looooong days, and I have one version which I >can upload, the redline version of that, and >another version with suggested stylistic >consistency plus the standard edits. We have >some decisions we can choose to make, or defer >since this is, after all, a Public Review draft. > >Thanks to all! >Rex > >At 1:37 PM -0800 1/27/08, Rex Brooks wrote: >>Hi Folks, >> >>Please check bullets 7 and 8 of Section 3.11.3. >>They repeat each other and somewhat contradict >>each other. I'm not going to stop or change it >>since this is taking longer than I thought it >>would. I'm keeping a page of notes on things >>that I think need to be looked over but this is >>the first one that actually caused me to stop >>long enough to send out a message about it. I >>have incorporated everyone else's proofing, so >>if you find anything, please keep a list and >>check the next version I post against your >>list, since it would not be a good idea for me >>to stop and rewind now that I'm going through >>it in great detail. >> >> >>Cheers, >>Rex >>-- >>Rex Brooks >>President, CEO >>Starbourne Communications Design >>GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison >>Berkeley, CA 94702 >>Tel: 510-898-0670 >> >>--------------------------------------------------------------------- >>To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that >>generates this mail. You may a link to this group and all your TCs in OASIS >>at: >>https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php > > >-- >Rex Brooks >President, CEO >Starbourne Communications Design >GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison >Berkeley, CA 94702 >Tel: 510-898-0670 > >Attachment converted: Macintosh >HD:NotesOnFinalEdit-01-28-08.doc (NO%F/«IC») >(0036A808) -- Rex Brooks President, CEO Starbourne Communications Design GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison Berkeley, CA 94702 Tel: 510-898-0670
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