Re: Update: Re: [emergency-msg] Please check Section 3.11.3

[Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com>]

I just uploaded the package to the TC Document 
Repository and our SC repository, too, just to 
have a complete set of files there as well.

Cheers,
Rex

At 5:32 AM -0800 1/28/08, Rex Brooks wrote:
>Hi Folks,
>
>I decided to include EDXL-HAVE in the Notices 
>section, but other than that, and changing the 
>version number to 014, I will upload the version 
>for the TC to review momentarily.
>
>Cheers,
>Rex
>
>At 5:43 PM -0800 1/27/08, Rex Brooks wrote:
>>HI folks,
>>
>>I thought I would give you and update and my 
>>Notes--all 4 pages (though 1.25 or so is a 
>>paste from a technical styling source 
>>reference). I will take another last look at it 
>>in the morning before I upload it. I went over 
>>the whole thing with a very fine-tooth comb, 
>>back-to-back looooong days, and I have one 
>>version which I can upload, the redline version 
>>of that, and another version with suggested 
>>stylistic consistency plus the standard edits. 
>>We have some decisions we can choose to make, 
>>or defer since this is, after all, a Public 
>>Review draft.
>>
>>Thanks to all!
>>Rex
>>
>>At 1:37 PM -0800 1/27/08, Rex Brooks wrote:
>>>Hi Folks,
>>>
>>>Please check bullets 7 and 8 of Section 
>>>3.11.3. They repeat each other and somewhat 
>>>contradict each other. I'm not going to stop 
>>>or change it since this is taking longer than 
>>>I thought it would. I'm keeping a page of 
>>>notes on things that I think need to be looked 
>>>over but this is the first one that actually 
>>>caused me to stop long enough to send out a 
>>>message about it. I have incorporated everyone 
>>>else's proofing, so if you find anything, 
>>>please keep a list and check the next version 
>>>I post against your list, since it would not 
>>>be a good idea for me to stop and rewind now 
>>>that I'm going through it in great detail.
>>>
>>>
>>>Cheers,
>>>Rex
>>>--
>>>Rex Brooks
>>>President, CEO
>>>Starbourne Communications Design
>>>GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
>>>Berkeley, CA 94702
>>>Tel: 510-898-0670
>>>
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>>--
>>Rex Brooks
>>President, CEO
>>Starbourne Communications Design
>>GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
>>Berkeley, CA 94702
>>Tel: 510-898-0670
>>
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>
>--
>Rex Brooks
>President, CEO
>Starbourne Communications Design
>GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
>Berkeley, CA 94702
>Tel: 510-898-0670


--
Rex Brooks
President, CEO
Starbourne Communications Design
GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
Berkeley, CA 94702
Tel: 510-898-0670