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Subject: Re: [emergency] EM Notifications SC Charter (revised)
This looks great! I think the first paragraph especially is well written. I did have some minor editorial comments, that do not amount to much, but I have included inline... > LIST OF DELIVERABLES What are the dates for these deliverables? > Development of a core set of messages to support the National > Incident Management System mandated in Homeland Security Presidential > Directive #5 You should provide a link to HSPD-5 (http://www.whitehouse.gov/news/releases/2003/02/20030228-9.html) > and based on established Incident Command System (ICS) > formats. Is there a link here that can be provided as well? Something that will give those reading the charter something to reference in case they need additional clarification? > In the course of developing these deliverables, the Subcommittee will > draw on the expertise of the GIS and Infrastructure Subcommittees. Add "EM" in front of these subcommittees, as in EM GIS. Eliot/Bill: have you guys finalized a name for the GIS SC? While I mention "EM GIS" here, I am not sure it really captures what it is you are doing. Also, the "Infrastructure" SC name, which you will see when the minutes of the f-2-f are sent, is now "EM Infrastructure Framework". > In addition, the Subcommittee will make recommendations to the full > Technical Committee Add EM before "Technical Committee" here as well. That's it. Looking forward to seeing this effort really get underway as a new OASIS TC this week! Allen -- R. Allen Wyke Chair, Emergency Management TC emtc@nc.rr.com http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/emergency
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