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Subject: Re: [emergency] Fwd: [emergency-msg] Groups - CAP v1.2 SCWorking Draft 04 to 05 (emergency-CAPv1.2

Rex / Jacob -

I'm having some difficulty making sense of that redline, particularly in the Data Dictionary section 3.2.  It appears that virtually everything in that section has been modified, which I'm sure isn't actually the case.  I wonder if it might be possible to get a redline version with just the actual changes in red?

Meanwhile, four specific observations:

1) Is the explicit definition of the dateTime type usage really a Normative Reference (section 1.6)?

2) Why are we adding quotes around the language in section 2.6?  What's being quoted?

3) Obviously the Acknowlegements section isn't finished.

4) Why are all the "By Whom" values other than Jacob Westfall removed from the Change History?

- Art

Art Botterell, Manager
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>>> Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com> 4/23/2009 6:03 AM >>>
Hi Folks,

I'm also forwarding this notification of the upload and availability 
of the "redline" version of document we will discuss in next week's 
TC meeting. That's why the filename indicates "04-to-05."

I'm doing this because I gave Jacob some erroneous information 
yesterday.  This is the "redline" version of the document (with 
tracked changes) which we will discuss in next Tuesday's TC meeting. 
I have also forwarded the "clean" document notification.

I neglected to notice that document-upload email notification is only 
shared with the groups listed in the Sharing row of the document 
submission form when the checkbox with the label "All groups with 
whom this document is shared." is checked in the Email Notifications 

My bad, so I'm forwarding this to the TC list and will also forward 
the companion document.

Apologies to Jacob,

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>Subject: [emergency-msg] Groups - CAP v1.2 SC Working Draft 04 to 05 
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>This is a marked up version of working draft 05 showing the changes made
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