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Subject: FW: Minor edits needed an attached WD 15


 

 


"If something is not worth doing, it`s not worth doing well" - Peter Drucker


Toby Considine
TC9, Inc

TC Chair: oBIX & WS-Calendar

TC Editor: EMIX, EnergyInterop

U.S. National Inst. of Standards and Tech. Smart Grid Architecture Committee

  

Email: Toby.Considine@gmail.com
Phone: (919)619-2104

http://www.tcnine.com/
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From: Ed Cazalet [mailto:ed@cazalet.com]
Sent: Monday, November 15, 2010 12:02 AM
To: Toby.Considine@gmail.com
Subject: Minor edits needed an attached WD 15

 

line 392 Incomplete sentence  add EMIX Terms.

line 393 Incomplete sentence -- add reference

 

line 493 becomes should be become

 

line  493 The Generic  Terms becomes specific when a Product Description is applied to the Generic Terms.

makes no sense

The Generic  Terms become specific when a Product Description is applied to EMIX Sequence.

 

 

 

Edward G. Cazalet, Ph.D.

101 First Street, Suite 552

Los Altos, CA 94022

650-949-5274

cell: 408-621-2772

ed@cazalet.com

www.cazalet.com

 

emix-1_0-spec-wd-15.pdf



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