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wd22-with-change.doc   Editorial issues
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                 Key: EMIX-362
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-362
             Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC
          Issue Type: Bug
            Reporter: Anne Hendry 
            Assignee: William Cox
            Priority: Minor


General issues
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Remove footnotes.  Either make them into normative/informative references
  or incorporate text into body of spec.

Lines 373 - 375
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Delete, up to the sentence starting "In EMIX the term 'intrinsic' ..."



Line 383
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Remove footnote, replace with reference to normative? reference.



Page 283, Footnote 4, (footnote line Line 25-26)
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"The phrase "prices to devices" is used in energy policy discussions
to describe a market model in which energy use decisions are distributed
to each device that uses energy. Under this model, decisions about"

This sentence ends prematurely.  If it's important, it should be finished
and added to the body of the spec.



Lines 566-567
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Paragraph seems to end prematurely.  Did some part of it get accidentally chopped?



Line 568 Table 3-2
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The 'Constraints' element row says "See Constraints at Section 15"
but Section 15 is 'Conformance Rules'.  I think this is referring to
Section 5 'Constraints and Market Requirements', not Section 15.
If so, change '15' to '5'.
Same issue with tables at lines 576 and 580.



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