[OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (EMIX-366) Section 10 Spelling,Grammatical, Textual

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William Cox updated EMIX-366:
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          Environment: William Cox
          Component/s: spec
    Affects Version/s: wd22
          Description: 
Section 10 issues:

Title should say "Energy Resources" rather than ...Offer Descriptions... - use is more broad.

Early in section add "Resource describe the performance envelope--the maximum that a resource can deliver. The dynamic status of a resource can be managed with interaction protocols (see e.g. EiFeedback in [EnergyInteroperation]"

NOTE it is an open issue whether to include "the needle" for a resource. I think that extending in the message and management system is the right approach, so I haven't raised the issue in EMIX.

628 Latin phrase should be in italics. Consider also for ex ante, etc

663 This section describes Base Resources (671, table caption). This should be "Resource Description".

Also in section, these are not exactly "subclasses" but "extensions" - consider the terminology and make uniform through the document.

680 "Power Ramps are conformed based upon the type of appearance they make" - reword. Sentence is unclear as well as complex.

686 Remember, resources can be used without offering them to market. Offering to market is a benefit of using resources, limiting mismatch, but resources have applications beyond markets.  Applies to whole section.



             Priority: Minor  (was: Major)

> Section 10 Spelling, Grammatical, Textual
> -----------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: EMIX-366
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-366
>             Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>          Components: spec
>    Affects Versions: wd22
>         Environment: William Cox
>            Reporter: William Cox
>            Assignee: Toby Considine
>            Priority: Minor
>
> Section 10 issues:
> Title should say "Energy Resources" rather than ...Offer Descriptions... - use is more broad.
> Early in section add "Resource describe the performance envelope--the maximum that a resource can deliver. The dynamic status of a resource can be managed with interaction protocols (see e.g. EiFeedback in [EnergyInteroperation]"
> NOTE it is an open issue whether to include "the needle" for a resource. I think that extending in the message and management system is the right approach, so I haven't raised the issue in EMIX.
> 628 Latin phrase should be in italics. Consider also for ex ante, etc
> 663 This section describes Base Resources (671, table caption). This should be "Resource Description".
> Also in section, these are not exactly "subclasses" but "extensions" - consider the terminology and make uniform through the document.
> 680 "Power Ramps are conformed based upon the type of appearance they make" - reword. Sentence is unclear as well as complex.
> 686 Remember, resources can be used without offering them to market. Offering to market is a benefit of using resources, limiting mismatch, but resources have applications beyond markets.  Applies to whole section.

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