[OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (EMIX-362) wd22-with-change.doc Editorial issues

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Toby Considine commented on EMIX-362:
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<sigh />
Most of these suggestions are to restore the document to the pre-PR01 point...

General issues 
============== 

Remove footnotes. Either make them into normative/informative references 
  or incorporate text into body of spec. 

>> Repeated requests to define words in last PR. Dictionaries do not fit into the OASIS Normative and Non-nomative references

Lines 373 - 375 
--------------- 
Delete, up to the sentence starting "In EMIX the term 'intrinsic' ..." 

>> PR from the IRC requested that we put those sentences in. Stet.


Line 383 
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Remove footnote, replace with reference to normative? reference. 

>>See above


Page 283, Footnote 4, (footnote line Line 25-26) 
------------------------------------------------ 
"The phrase "prices to devices" is used in energy policy discussions 
to describe a market model in which energy use decisions are distributed 
to each device that uses energy. Under this model, decisions about" 

This sentence ends prematurely. If it's important, it should be finished 
and added to the body of the spec. 

>> Actually, its standard footnote behavior of wrapping to the next page.

Lines 566-567 
------------- 
Paragraph seems to end prematurely. Did some part of it get accidentally chopped? 

>>>>>
If you are referring to aragraph that appears on line 565-566 on *my* computer (why we don't use word documents for review) I see:

Each Power Product is applied to the EMIX Base Product before it is fully described. Because each element can be set for the while Sequence, or applied to individual intervals, each can vary over time.
>>> I can add "be: in front of applied...

Or we have Paragraph 568-570 *on my computer* which says

Full Requirements Contracts are the traditional "all-you-can-eat" electrical contract. Maximum delivery is limited by the physical infrastructure. Demand Charges may apply. This type of contract often appears in Residential markets.

I honestly do no know what to do with the line numbers that are not counted in a consistent way. 






















Line 568 Table 3-2 
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The 'Constraints' element row says "See Constraints at Section 15" 
but Section 15 is 'Conformance Rules'. I think this is referring to 
Section 5 'Constraints and Market Requirements', not Section 15. 
If so, change '15' to '5'. 
Same issue with tables at lines 576 and 580. 



> wd22-with-change.doc   Editorial issues
> ---------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: EMIX-362
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-362
>             Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC
>          Issue Type: Bug
>         Environment: Anne Hendry
>            Reporter: Anne Hendry 
>            Assignee: Toby Considine
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: wd23
>
>
> General issues
> ==============
> Remove footnotes.  Either make them into normative/informative references
>   or incorporate text into body of spec.
> Lines 373 - 375
> ---------------
> Delete, up to the sentence starting "In EMIX the term 'intrinsic' ..."
> Line 383
> --------
> Remove footnote, replace with reference to normative? reference.
> Page 283, Footnote 4, (footnote line Line 25-26)
> ------------------------------------------------
> "The phrase "prices to devices" is used in energy policy discussions
> to describe a market model in which energy use decisions are distributed
> to each device that uses energy. Under this model, decisions about"
> This sentence ends prematurely.  If it's important, it should be finished
> and added to the body of the spec.
> Lines 566-567
> -------------
> Paragraph seems to end prematurely.  Did some part of it get accidentally chopped?
> Line 568 Table 3-2
> ------------------
> The 'Constraints' element row says "See Constraints at Section 15"
> but Section 15 is 'Conformance Rules'.  I think this is referring to
> Section 5 'Constraints and Market Requirements', not Section 15.
> If so, change '15' to '5'.
> Same issue with tables at lines 576 and 580.

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