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Subject: Comments on emix-v1.0-csprd02
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Great job to the primary authors – this is a great specification. Here are my suggested changes:
259: Suggest changing to: “… by one Party to another Party”
372: Suggest changing to: “… can be offered…”
453: change “therefor” to “therefore”
454: change “has is” to “is” – for Minimum Recovery Duration and Minimum Duration Between Invocations
454: (throughout document, actually) – adhere to consistent use of the period (.) punctuation mark in tables, bullets, etc.
454: Why do Availability Schedule and Unavailability Schedule have identical definitions – I would expect a slight difference
473: suggest changing to: “… meter, an aggregation…”
479: suggest changing to: “… Purchase Order, on each…”
489: existing wording not clear: “… not include quantity or precise.”
492: suggest changing from “This illustration” to “Figure 6-1” (since it is on the following page)
507, 512: Change comma to a period
510: add space to: “Table 4-1describe”
513: Product Description: change “nor” to “not”
515: suggest changing to: “… Sequence as a temporally…”
519: existing wording not clear for Relation: “… one Interval to other…”
531: change to: “Electrical energy
537: existing wording not clear: “… could be brought market…”
548: add colon after “that”
549a: revise to be consistent with 762: “energy = power * duration”
551: change “with in” to “within”
575: Price Relative: change wording to: “… and
590: Price – change from “… choice one of a Price…” to “… choice of either Price…”
590, 599: Energy Units – revise description to read: “Denominates the units to which the Price applies.”
599: Block Energy Price: revise wording to read: “… Quantify and the price for the next…”
603 616: (and throughout), standardizes on “TeMIX” rather than “TEMIX”
603: remove extra period at end of sentence
608: change “intervals” to “interval”
612, 790: (throughout) Energy Item equation – why is this “Time” rather than duration, as in 549? Make consistent throughout, if appropriate
623, 624: Revise to read: “One charge can be applied to each of the products as above
625: Measurement Interval: change to “Granularity of Power Use…”
625: What is the right term: “floor”, Demand Charge Floor”, “Demand Floor” – it is used in three different ways in this table… make consistent
633: Full Requirements Power: “Demand Charges” is an incomplete thought…
633: Full Requirements Power Maximum and Minimum: existing wording not clear: “… draw energy at least the minimum rate”
633: Hourly Day Ahead Pricing: change to “Full Requirements Power”
634: add period to end of sentence
676, 683: (and elsewhere in document): standardize on the use of either “min” or “minutes” but, do not mix the units
678: change to: “… as above,
683: change from “100MW” to “100 MW”
703: Constraints – change from “below” to “in Table 10-2”
710: Staging Ramp and Recovery Ramp: change to “An array of Power…” 736: change to something like: “… many markets,
787: clean up the “Error!” reference
792: Strike Price: - where is “Option Writer” defined?
792: Granularity – change from “at10:00” to “at 10:00”
820: Power Frequency – change from “Powr Quality” to “Power Quality”
834: Transport Loss Factor – modify parantheses to match Conversion Loss Factor: “Loss Factor * purchase amount = delivered amount). Also, throughout the document, be consistent in what is on the left side of each equation, and what is on the right side – both methods are used.
867: change “Conformance” to “conformance”, unless there is a deliberate reason for the capitalization
875: add period to end of sentence Regards, Sharon E. Dinges, CEM
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