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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (EMIX-401) Ominibus Issue for PaulKnight


Ominibus Issue for Paul Knight
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                 Key: EMIX-401
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-401
             Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC
          Issue Type: Improvement
         Environment: Paul Knight
            Reporter: Toby Considine
            Assignee: William Cox



Line	Type	Comment
9	Editorial (ed)	Reference should be [NIST Roadmap]
20	ed	Remove extra words "listed in" and "sections"
35	ed	Reference should be [IEC TC57]
54.5	ed	Need reference for [RDDL 2.0] (cited at 
55	ed	Use proper OASIS citation format
62	ed	Use proper OASIS citation format
74.5	ed	Add reference to ISO20022, cited at
78	ed	No such OASIS designation as "an approved White Paper of the EMIX TC"
113	ed	Remove ":"
155	ed	Brackets, not parens, around "TeMIX"
157	consistency	TeMIX is defined differently from two lines above. There are several other instances of this.  Is it transactive or transactional? If it is both, explain better.
255	terms	Need to define ISO and RTO (and differentiate ISO from the ISO on line 37)
287	ed	its → is
313	ed	repeating you → repeating as you
315	ed	TEMIX → TeMIX  (needed several places throughout document)
322	ed	and → an
330	ed	application the → application of the
355	ed	for a one → for one
386	ed	in figure 4-2, should probably be EMIX rather than Emix Product
400	ed	Table 4-2 - Exercise Lead time - remove extra "to"
400	ed	Table 4-2 - Strike Price - add "for" before "delivery"
406	ed	Table 4-3 heading - TEMIX → TeMIX  (needed several places throughout document)
422	ed	Table 4-5 - Exercise - step to that → step that
450	ed	remove "to"
454	ed	Table 5-1 - Minimum Duration  Between Invocations - capitalize second "resource"; remove "has"
454	ed	Table 5-1 - Response Time - from here to end of table, capitalize "resource" (8 times) (and lower-case Requests)
459	ed	Table 5-2 - first line - capitalize "resource"
467	ed	TEMIX → TeMIX  (needed several places throughout document)
479	ed	n → on
480	ed	is → are
481	ed	remove final half-sentence ( or complete it)
485	ed	Si → SI
489	ed	precise → price
510	ed	space before "describe"
513	ed	Table 7-1 - Product Description - last sentence is unintelligible; capitalize Gluons and Interval
513	ed	Sequence - Capitalize Sequence, Intervals
515	ed	is → as ; capitalize Interval
524	clarity	In interval B, meaning of "50 / MWh" is not clear. Are there units to "50"? Is it $50 / MWh? or 50 MWh? In interval C, what is 1.5 / MWh? Why is this representation different from Interval A?
535	ed	lower case Provides
551	ed	with in → within
561	ed	first "load" → loads
563	ed	period at end
569	ed	delete last "Descriptions" and italicize the first one
584	ed	while → whole
600	ed	TEMIX → TeMIX  (needed several places throughout document)
603	ed	Nightmare paragraph - TEMIX, capitalize Product, remove extra period, remove spaces inside parens, TEMIX. TEMIX
625	ed	Table 9-6 - Measurement Interval - of → if
697	ed	matters → matter
743	ed	Is it transactive or transactional? 
744	ed	It → TeMIX
759	ed	When → When a
765	ed	2-hours → two hours
766	ed	2-MWh → 2 MWh
772	ed	2- hours → two hours
773	ed	2-hours → two hours
787	ed	missing reference
790	ed	Table 11-1 - Transactive State - "conformed to" → restricted to  (??)
792	ed	Table 11-2 - Granularity - space after "at"
820	ed	Table 13-1 - Power Frequency - Powr → Power
857	ed	Table 15-1 - Product quality - and be → can be
887	ed	Capitalize gluon
899	ed	remove ";"
900	ed	capitalize lineage
902	ed	Sentence beginning "In general, if ..." has no "then" clause. Probably - delete "if"
904	ed	delete "an" ; argument → model (?)
905	ed	discussed → discussed as a 
908	ed	roots the → roots for the  (?)
911	ed	capitalize artifact
918	ed	capitalize artifact
922	ed	delete "are"
928-932	ed	mind your P's and Q's  - capitalize Price and Quantity
1015	ed	change "X-" to "x-"  (lower case)  (or if upper case is allowed, be explicit)
1018	ed	defined → defined in
1042	ed	Sentence doesn't parse.  Maybe: adding → that   (?)
1102	ed	Gluon - though → through (feed this one back into WS-Calendar)
1102	ed	Table label should be C-1
1108	ed	Table label should be C-2
1114	ed	Table label should be C-3



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