[OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (EMIX-401) Ominibus Issue for PaulKnight

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Toby Considine commented on EMIX-401:
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535	ed	lower case Provides
done tc

551	ed	with in → within
done in wd24
561	ed	first "load" → loads
done tc

563	ed	period at end
done tc
569	ed	delete last "Descriptions" and italicize the first one
done tc
584	ed	while → whole
done - tc

600	ed	TEMIX → TeMIX  (needed several places throughout document)
done tc

603	ed	Nightmare paragraph - TEMIX, capitalize Product, remove extra period, remove spaces inside parens, TEMIX. TEMIX
done tc

625	ed	Table 9-6 - Measurement Interval - of → if
??? Think this was gotten in wd24
697	ed	matters → matter
done tc

743	ed	Is it transactive or transactional? 
transactive - tc

744	ed	It → TeMIX
fixed -tc

759	ed	When → When a
done tc

765	ed	2-hours → two hours
done tc
766	ed	2-MWh → 2 MWh
done tc

772	ed	2- hours → two hours
done tc

773	ed	2-hours → two hours
done tc

787	ed	missing reference
fixed in WD24
790	ed	Table 11-1 - Transactive State - "conformed to" → restricted to  (??)
changed in WD24

792	ed	Table 11-2 - Granularity - space after "at"
Fixed in WD24
820	ed	Table 13-1 - Power Frequency - Powr → Power
done in WD24

857	ed	Table 15-1 - Product quality - and be → can be
done tc

887	ed	Capitalize gluon
done tc
899	ed	remove ";"
done tc
900	ed	capitalize lineage
done tc
902	ed	Sentence beginning "In general, if ..." has no "then" clause. Probably - delete "if"
done tc

904	ed	delete "an" ; argument → model (?)
done "model" tc

905	ed	discussed → discussed as a 
done tc

908	ed	roots the → roots for the  (?)
done tc

911	ed	capitalize artifact
done tc

918	ed	capitalize artifact
done tc



> Ominibus Issue for Paul Knight
> ------------------------------
>
>                 Key: EMIX-401
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-401
>             Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>         Environment: Paul Knight
>            Reporter: Toby Considine
>            Assignee: William Cox
>
> Line	Type	Comment
> 9	Editorial (ed)	Reference should be [NIST Roadmap]
> 20	ed	Remove extra words "listed in" and "sections"
> 35	ed	Reference should be [IEC TC57]
> 54.5	ed	Need reference for [RDDL 2.0] (cited at 
> 55	ed	Use proper OASIS citation format
> 62	ed	Use proper OASIS citation format
> 74.5	ed	Add reference to ISO20022, cited at
> 78	ed	No such OASIS designation as "an approved White Paper of the EMIX TC"
> 113	ed	Remove ":"
> 155	ed	Brackets, not parens, around "TeMIX"
> 157	consistency	TeMIX is defined differently from two lines above. There are several other instances of this.  Is it transactive or transactional? If it is both, explain better.
> 255	terms	Need to define ISO and RTO (and differentiate ISO from the ISO on line 37)
> 287	ed	its → is
> 313	ed	repeating you → repeating as you
> 315	ed	TEMIX → TeMIX  (needed several places throughout document)
> 322	ed	and → an
> 330	ed	application the → application of the
> 355	ed	for a one → for one
> 386	ed	in figure 4-2, should probably be EMIX rather than Emix Product
> 400	ed	Table 4-2 - Exercise Lead time - remove extra "to"
> 400	ed	Table 4-2 - Strike Price - add "for" before "delivery"
> 406	ed	Table 4-3 heading - TEMIX → TeMIX  (needed several places throughout document)
> 422	ed	Table 4-5 - Exercise - step to that → step that
> 450	ed	remove "to"
> 454	ed	Table 5-1 - Minimum Duration  Between Invocations - capitalize second "resource"; remove "has"
> 454	ed	Table 5-1 - Response Time - from here to end of table, capitalize "resource" (8 times) (and lower-case Requests)
> 459	ed	Table 5-2 - first line - capitalize "resource"
> 467	ed	TEMIX → TeMIX  (needed several places throughout document)
> 479	ed	n → on
> 480	ed	is → are
> 481	ed	remove final half-sentence ( or complete it)
> 485	ed	Si → SI
> 489	ed	precise → price
> 510	ed	space before "describe"
> 513	ed	Table 7-1 - Product Description - last sentence is unintelligible; capitalize Gluons and Interval
> 513	ed	Sequence - Capitalize Sequence, Intervals
> 515	ed	is → as ; capitalize Interval
> 524	clarity	In interval B, meaning of "50 / MWh" is not clear. Are there units to "50"? Is it $50 / MWh? or 50 MWh? In interval C, what is 1.5 / MWh? Why is this representation different from Interval A?
> 535	ed	lower case Provides
> 551	ed	with in → within
> 561	ed	first "load" → loads
> 563	ed	period at end
> 569	ed	delete last "Descriptions" and italicize the first one
> 584	ed	while → whole
> 600	ed	TEMIX → TeMIX  (needed several places throughout document)
> 603	ed	Nightmare paragraph - TEMIX, capitalize Product, remove extra period, remove spaces inside parens, TEMIX. TEMIX
> 625	ed	Table 9-6 - Measurement Interval - of → if
> 697	ed	matters → matter
> 743	ed	Is it transactive or transactional? 
> 744	ed	It → TeMIX
> 759	ed	When → When a
> 765	ed	2-hours → two hours
> 766	ed	2-MWh → 2 MWh
> 772	ed	2- hours → two hours
> 773	ed	2-hours → two hours
> 787	ed	missing reference
> 790	ed	Table 11-1 - Transactive State - "conformed to" → restricted to  (??)
> 792	ed	Table 11-2 - Granularity - space after "at"
> 820	ed	Table 13-1 - Power Frequency - Powr → Power
> 857	ed	Table 15-1 - Product quality - and be → can be
> 887	ed	Capitalize gluon
> 899	ed	remove ";"
> 900	ed	capitalize lineage
> 902	ed	Sentence beginning "In general, if ..." has no "then" clause. Probably - delete "if"
> 904	ed	delete "an" ; argument → model (?)
> 905	ed	discussed → discussed as a 
> 908	ed	roots the → roots for the  (?)
> 911	ed	capitalize artifact
> 918	ed	capitalize artifact
> 922	ed	delete "are"
> 928-932	ed	mind your P's and Q's  - capitalize Price and Quantity
> 1015	ed	change "X-" to "x-"  (lower case)  (or if upper case is allowed, be explicit)
> 1018	ed	defined → defined in
> 1042	ed	Sentence doesn't parse.  Maybe: adding → that   (?)
> 1102	ed	Gluon - though → through (feed this one back into WS-Calendar)
> 1102	ed	Table label should be C-1
> 1108	ed	Table label should be C-2
> 1114	ed	Table label should be C-3

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