Reviewing the Document: Figures and Illustrations

["Toby Considine" <Toby.Considine@gmail.com>]

1)      Please look to the quality of the captions. Experience has shown that some look to the table of figures and the table of tables first, and decide if the document is comprehensible. Some attention here might improve readability and acceptance

2)      Some of the exact placements of UML figures was chosen to minimize pages that has ¼ page of text and then a page turn. Some of it may be un-helpful, Please comment on this as well.

 

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“The single biggest problem in communication is the illusion that it has taken place.”
– George Bernard Shaw.

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Toby Considine TC9, Inc TC Chair: oBIX & WS-Calendar TC Editor: EMIX, EnergyInterop U.S. National Inst. of Standards and Tech. Smart Grid Architecture Committee

Email: Toby.Considine@gmail.com Phone: (919)619-2104 http://www.tcnine.com/ blog: www.NewDaedalus.com