[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (EMIX-465) Editorial notes for WD29

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Editorial notes for WD29
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                 Key: EMIX-465
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-465
             Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC
          Issue Type: Improvement
          Components: spec
    Affects Versions: wd29
         Environment: Gerald Gray
            Reporter: Gerald Gray
            Assignee: William Cox
            Priority: Minor


Table 3-4 Gluon definition - remove the word "is"
Availability is described as both vavailability and Vavailability
Ln. 165 - 166 For this version, this rule results namespaces indicated in (duplicate line - the line and thought appear to be completed below this)
Ln . 172	Change:  We do not specify versions beyond those required by the namespace maintenance policy.
To:  Versioning beyond that which is required by the namespace maintenance policy is not specified.
Ln. 392 delete "it"
Table 3-3 Service Area description - delete "is"
Table 4-1 "a UID" not "an UID"
Ln 506 remove the comma
Ln 544 change "and" to "an"
Ln 550 change "he" to "are the" (? Not sure - perhaps something else is intended)
Ln 565 the first sentence makes no sense; not sure what is intended here
Ln 571 insert "which" before "is"
Ln 586 plurality of this sentence does not match
Ln 603 change "my" to "may"
Ln 629-630 national international - don't agree in scope; may want to rewrite
Ln 632 change "A" to lower case
Ln 637 delete "to"
Ln 663 "below," is repeated
Ln 671 8.2.1 title is a bit long
Ln 743 change All to lowercase a
Table 10-4 Consumption ceiling, have both "is" and "are"
Ln 946 IEC 61970 is not a subcommittee, but rather, one of the standards specified by TC57.  Specifically IEC 61970-301 describes resources in detail.
Ln 1138 change "In this section we recapitulate the rules that define inheritance including direction in WS-Calendar
To "The rules that define inheritance, including direction in WS-Calendar, are recapitulated"
Ln 1158 there is a space after the comma following "prototypical"
Ln 1188 "What are the rules?"  (is this a note to self?)
Appendix B. Extensibility - instead of saying "looks like this", we may want to use, "example of"
Ln 1379-1380 change to "The non-normative white paper on the use of the WS-Calendar published by that committee provides a basis of understanding for that specification."


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