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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (EMIX-471) CLONE -Editorial notesfor WD29
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-471?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=25999#action_25999 ] Aaron Snyder commented on EMIX-471: ------------------------------------ eliminated "fixed" pieces and left only those that need attention... Availability is described as both vavailability and Vavailability >>cannot locate issue... Ln . 172 Change: We do not specify versions beyond those required by the namespace maintenance policy. To: Versioning beyond that which is required by the namespace maintenance policy is not specified. >>agree, apply to wd31, ln 168 wd30 Ln. 392 delete "it" >>agree, apply to wd31, ln 390 wd30 Table 3-3 Service Area description - delete "is" >>agree, apply to wd31, second sentence should read "The Service Area expresses locations..." Table 4-1 "a UID" not "an UID" >>agree, apply to wd31 Ln 506 remove the comma >>agree, apply to wd31, ln 504 wd30 should read "It is used for simple tenders and agreements." Ln 544 change "and" to "an" >>agree, apply to wd31, ln 542 wd30 Ln 550 change "he" to "are the" (? Not sure - perhaps something else is intended) >>agree, apply to wd31, ln 548 wd30 Ln 586 plurality of this sentence does not match >>agree, apply to wd31, change ln 585 wd30 to "...a Product description it can then..." Ln 603 change "my" to "may" >>agree, apply in wd31, ln 602 wd30 Ln 629-630 national international - don't agree in scope; may want to rewrite >> agree, apply to wd31, change ln 637-638 wd30 to "...then national and international products..." Ln 637 delete "to" >>agree, apply to wd31, change ln 645 wd30 Ln 1138 change "In this section we recapitulate the rules that define inheritance including direction in WS-Calendar To "The rules that define inheritance, including direction in WS-Calendar, are recapitulated" >>agree, apply to wd31, change to wd30 ln 1155 Appendix B. Extensibility - instead of saying "looks like this", we may want to use, "example of" >>agree, apply to wd31, changes to wd30 lines: >>1259, change to "In emix.xsd, the extensibility pattern is:" >>1269, change to "An example of non-extensible enumerated types is:" >>1281, change to "The enumerations used in the specification follow this pattern:" Ln 1379-1380 change to "The non-normative white paper on the use of the WS-Calendar published by that committee provides a basis of understanding for that specification." >>agree, apply to wd31, changes to wd30 ln 1397-1398 > CLONE -Editorial notes for WD29 > ------------------------------- > > Key: EMIX-471 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-471 > Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC > Issue Type: Improvement > Components: spec > Affects Versions: wd29 > Environment: Gerald Gray > Reporter: Gerald Gray > Assignee: Aaron Snyder > Priority: Minor > Fix For: wd31 > > > Table 3-4 Gluon definition - remove the word "is" > Availability is described as both vavailability and Vavailability > Ln. 165 - 166 For this version, this rule results namespaces indicated in (duplicate line - the line and thought appear to be completed below this) > Ln . 172 Change: We do not specify versions beyond those required by the namespace maintenance policy. > To: Versioning beyond that which is required by the namespace maintenance policy is not specified. > Ln. 392 delete "it" > Table 3-3 Service Area description - delete "is" > Table 4-1 "a UID" not "an UID" > Ln 506 remove the comma > Ln 544 change "and" to "an" > Ln 550 change "he" to "are the" (? Not sure - perhaps something else is intended) > Ln 565 the first sentence makes no sense; not sure what is intended here > Ln 571 insert "which" before "is" > Ln 586 plurality of this sentence does not match > Ln 603 change "my" to "may" > Ln 629-630 national international - don't agree in scope; may want to rewrite > Ln 632 change "A" to lower case > Ln 637 delete "to" > Ln 663 "below," is repeated > Ln 671 8.2.1 title is a bit long > Ln 743 change All to lowercase a > Table 10-4 Consumption ceiling, have both "is" and "are" > Ln 946 IEC 61970 is not a subcommittee, but rather, one of the standards specified by TC57. Specifically IEC 61970-301 describes resources in detail. > Ln 1138 change "In this section we recapitulate the rules that define inheritance including direction in WS-Calendar > To "The rules that define inheritance, including direction in WS-Calendar, are recapitulated" > Ln 1158 there is a space after the comma following "prototypical" > Ln 1188 "What are the rules?" (is this a note to self?) > Appendix B. Extensibility - instead of saying "looks like this", we may want to use, "example of" > Ln 1379-1380 change to "The non-normative white paper on the use of the WS-Calendar published by that committee provides a basis of understanding for that specification." -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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