[OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (EMIX-471) CLONE -Editorial notesfor WD29

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Toby Considine commented on EMIX-471:
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Availability is described as both vavailability and Vavailability 
>>cannot locate issue... 
tc>>fixed

Ln . 172 Change: We do not specify versions beyond those required by the namespace maintenance policy. 
To: Versioning beyond that which is required by the namespace maintenance policy is not specified. 
>>agree, apply to wd31, ln 168 wd30 
tc>>fixed

Ln. 392 delete "it" 
>>agree, apply to wd31, ln 390 wd30 
TC>> done

Table 3-3 Service Area description - delete "is" 
>>agree, apply to wd31, second sentence should read "The Service Area expresses locations..." 
TC>> done

Table 4-1 "a UID" not "an UID" 
>>agree, apply to wd31 
tc>> done



> CLONE -Editorial notes for WD29
> -------------------------------
>
>                 Key: EMIX-471
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-471
>             Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: spec
>    Affects Versions: wd29
>         Environment: Gerald Gray
>            Reporter: Gerald Gray
>            Assignee: Aaron Snyder 
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: wd31
>
>
> Table 3-4 Gluon definition - remove the word "is"
> Availability is described as both vavailability and Vavailability
> Ln. 165 - 166 For this version, this rule results namespaces indicated in (duplicate line - the line and thought appear to be completed below this)
> Ln . 172	Change:  We do not specify versions beyond those required by the namespace maintenance policy.
> To:  Versioning beyond that which is required by the namespace maintenance policy is not specified.
> Ln. 392 delete "it"
> Table 3-3 Service Area description - delete "is"
> Table 4-1 "a UID" not "an UID"
> Ln 506 remove the comma
> Ln 544 change "and" to "an"
> Ln 550 change "he" to "are the" (? Not sure - perhaps something else is intended)
> Ln 565 the first sentence makes no sense; not sure what is intended here
> Ln 571 insert "which" before "is"
> Ln 586 plurality of this sentence does not match
> Ln 603 change "my" to "may"
> Ln 629-630 national international - don't agree in scope; may want to rewrite
> Ln 632 change "A" to lower case
> Ln 637 delete "to"
> Ln 663 "below," is repeated
> Ln 671 8.2.1 title is a bit long
> Ln 743 change All to lowercase a
> Table 10-4 Consumption ceiling, have both "is" and "are"
> Ln 946 IEC 61970 is not a subcommittee, but rather, one of the standards specified by TC57.  Specifically IEC 61970-301 describes resources in detail.
> Ln 1138 change "In this section we recapitulate the rules that define inheritance including direction in WS-Calendar
> To "The rules that define inheritance, including direction in WS-Calendar, are recapitulated"
> Ln 1158 there is a space after the comma following "prototypical"
> Ln 1188 "What are the rules?"  (is this a note to self?)
> Appendix B. Extensibility - instead of saying "looks like this", we may want to use, "example of"
> Ln 1379-1380 change to "The non-normative white paper on the use of the WS-Calendar published by that committee provides a basis of understanding for that specification."

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