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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (EMIX-537) TC Admin comments on PR04

     [ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-537?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ]

William Cox updated EMIX-537:

      Component/s:     (was: errata)
    Fix Version/s: errata for CS01
       Resolution: Correct in errata to 1.0 

Note that the format used in PR04 is that in the OASIS TC Specification Template provided.

> TC Admin comments on PR04
> -------------------------
>                 Key: EMIX-537
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/EMIX-537
>             Project: OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>    Affects Versions: CSD04/PR04
>         Environment: PR04 Comments TC Admin
>            Reporter: William Cox
>            Assignee: William Cox
>             Fix For: errata for CS01
> Insert link to email
> TC Administration provides the following comments for the public
> review of the above Committee Specification Drafts. Comments are
> divided between fixes required to conform to the TC Process
> requirements and general observations. The public review was announced
> on 04 October 2011.
> (http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/tc-announce/201110/msg00003.html)
> Required:
> - We noted no issues that require fixing.
> General:
> The following items were observed in the content. These do not require
> correcting but we provide them for your consideration.
> 1. Normative and non-normative references to other OASIS documents do
> not use OASIS recommended format:
> Normative references:
> - SOA-RM OASIS Standard, OASIS Reference Model for Service Oriented
> Architecture 1.0, October 2006 http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-rm/v1.0/
> - WS-Calendar OASIS Committee Specification 1.0, WS-Calendar, July
> 2011, http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-calendar/ws-calendar-spec/v1.0/cs01/ws-calendar-spec-v1.0-cs01.pdf
> Non-normative:
> - TeMIX Transactive Energy Market Information Exchange [TeMIX] an
> approved Note of the EMIX TC. Ed Cazalet et al.
> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37954/TeMIX-20100523.pdf
> - WS-Calendar Note OASIS Committee Note Public Review Draft,
> WS-Calendar Conceptual Overview,
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-calendar/ws-calendar/v1.0/CD01/WS-Calendar-Conceptual-Overview-CD01.pdf
> The citation construction that we use for OASIS documents is:
> Work Product title (italicized). Approval date (DD Month YYYY). Stage
> Identifier and Revision Number (e.g., Committee Specification Draft
> 01). Principal URI (version-specific URI, e.g., including the filename
> component with stage and revision: /somespec-v1.0-csd01.html).
> For current specifications, we include these in the cite-as section of
> the cover pages.
> So, for SOA-RM (which is an older spec and does not include a
> 'cite-as' entry), the format would be:
> [SOA-RM]
> <ital>Reference Model for Service Oriented Architecture 1.0</ital>. 12
> October 2006. OASIS Standard.
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-rm/v1.0/soa-rm.html
> For WS-Calendar:
> [WS-Calendar]
> <ital>WS-Calendar Version 1.0</ital>. 30 July 2011. OASIS Committee
> Specification 01.
> http://docs.oasisopen.org/ws-calendar/ws-calendar-spec/v1.0/cs01/ws-calendar-spec-v1.0-cs01.html.
> For TeMIX:
> [TeMIX-Information-Model]
> <ital>Transactional Energy Market Information Exchange (TeMIX); An
> Information Model for Energy Transactions in the Smart Grid</ital>. 23
> May 2010. Committee White Paper.
> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37954/TeMIX-20100523.pdf
> For the WS-Calendar note, the citation form would be:
> [WS-Calendar-Overview]
> <ital>Conceptual Overview of WS-Calendar CD01</ital>. 15 September
> 2010. Committee Note Public Review Draft.
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-calendar/ws-calendar/v1.0/CD01/WS-Calendar-Conceptual-Overview-CD01.pdf
> 2. There is a non-normative reference to a document with a broken URI:
> NIEM NIEM Technical Architecture Committee (NTAC), National
> Information Exchange Model Naming and Design Rules v1.3, October 2008,
> http://www.niem.gov/pdf/NIEM-NDR-1-3.pdf
> 3. The namespace document referenced in line 159 (PDF) no longer
> exists. The text is: "... of this document at
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/emix/2011/ will change accordingly. "
> 4. LIne 269 (PDF) refers to an appendix which no longer exists, at
> least in its earlier location or form: The text is: "... [WS-Calendar]
> semantics is provided in Appendix E."
> Please let us know if you have any questions on any of these.

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