RE: [emix] Please re-review the two notes for Thursday, June 14

[Joshua Phillips <jphillips@spp.org>]

Bill and all,

Thanks for the consideration of the comments I made in the previous version.  I had hoped to get to this, but have had a chaotic schedule and some family concerns that kept me out of the office and tied up the last two weeks.

 

I’m good with many of the edits.  I have made some additional suggestions for the edits in my attached document.

 

Regards,

Joshua

 

From: emix@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:emix@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of William Cox
Sent: Wednesday, June 13, 2012 4:58 PM
To: EMIX TC
Subject: [emix] Please re-review the two notes for Thursday, June 14

 

Links are in previous emails.

Thanks!

bill cox

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