[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (ENERGYINTEROP-347) Consolidatedlist of verbiage adjustments

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Consolidated list of verbiage adjustments
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                 Key: ENERGYINTEROP-347
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ENERGYINTEROP-347
             Project: OASIS Energy Interoperation TC
          Issue Type: Improvement
    Affects Versions: wd22
            Reporter: Gerald Gray
            Assignee: William Cox
            Priority: Minor


Line 329 - 300 change to:  four types of prices are used:
Line 353-354 "locked down" colloquialism, 
   From:  The prices may be fixed tariffs absolutely locked down
   To: The price may be fixed with no changes allowed to the tariffs
Line 466 should be "mirrors"
Line 573 paraphrase should be in quotes:  "I won't turn on any resource for less than $100."
Line 484 should be "actors" 
Line 494 from: "In this section, we clarify terminology for roles..."
	To:  In this section terminology for roles is clarified
Line 498 from: At this level of description, we ignore the presence of application level acknowledgement of invocations
	To: At this level of description the presence of application level acknowledgement is ignored...
Line 503 change to:  The typical push or pull patterns for interactions are also ignored but deferred to later sections.
Footnote:  Strike "we are indebted", Virtual End Note, Source: EPRI, http://my.epri.com/portal/server.pt?Abstract_id=000000000001020432  
Line 516 change to: There is no hierarchy implied by these examples, they are used to show how the pairwise
Line 534change to:  Two structured roles in each interaction have been defined
Line 547 strike "as we have seen"
Line 548 change to: the pattern is recursive as shown in Figure 5-45-4
Line 557 change to: In this section the interaction patterns are described of the services for demand response respectively
Line 560 change to: By applying the recursive definitions of VTN and VEN, specific services will be described in the next sections.
Figure 5-6 should the R in DR be capitalized per the camelcase guidance in section 1.6 as DR is an acronym?

Line 608 - 609 change to:  The power object in EMIX can include specification of voltage, hertz, quality and other features.
Line 685 change to: In the following sections services and operations consistent with [SOA-RM] are described.
Line 687 change to: The roles are indicated by the table headings; Service Consumer for the actor or role that
Line 690 change to:  This terminology is used through all the service definitions that are described in this standard.
Line 705 change to:  The services are divided into four broad categories



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