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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (ENERGYINTEROP-445) W24 MiscEditorial
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William Cox updated ENERGYINTEROP-445:
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Resolution:
Modified from Description; all evaluated by WTC. Propose applying all but those with negative instructions in ALL CAPS.
476 add "a" before "seller"
476 change "the" to "a"
477 change "on retailer" to "on a retailer"
501 move "is" from before parenthetical remark to just before "called"
525 :insert space after "Table" separating from "5" -- NOTE THIS MAY BE CORRECTED BY THE GENERAL FIX CAPTIONS ITEM
562 What does "transactioned resources" mean: just say "resource" AGREE. TRANSACTIONED SEEMS TO SUGGEST "a resource that is subject to transactive or event interaction"?
590 change "transactional" to "transactive"
519: change "transactional power" to "for transactive power" which is an amount of power delivered over an interval of time at a constant rate of delivery"
617 : change : "request for a single interval" to "request for power delivered over a single interval of time".
619 change "transactional" to "transactive" and "power"
649 change "replication" to "repetition"
651. delete "specific response rates" NOT SURE ABOUT THIS ONE. "SPECIFIED RATES" as for 652?
652 change "transactive purchase of fixed blocks of energy" to "transactions of energy delivered at specified rates over an interval"
716: change "the customer" to "both customers and suppliers" SHOULD BE "SUPPLIERS AND CONSUMERS" rather than CUSTOMERS AND SUPPLIERS IN MY OPINION
719: generally a VEN and not a VTN would participate in in DR program where the VTN is the controller. THIS WAS LOOKING UP FROM THE VTN AND THE VEN; COULD BE REWORDED BUT "CONTROLLER" IS NOT THE RIGHT WORD.
719. Delete: "distributed energy program" unless it can be defined clearly. ...OR PROVIDES DISTRIBUTED ENERGY RESOURCES...
739"load and usage projection: is nowhere defined or provided for. CORRECT. SUGGEST DELETING. This is likely an application supporting ASHRAE SPC201P
was:Added to editorial collector for wd24.
> W24 Misc Editorial
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>
> Key: ENERGYINTEROP-445
> URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ENERGYINTEROP-445
> Project: OASIS Energy Interoperation TC
> Issue Type: Sub-task
> Components: spec
> Affects Versions: wd24
> Environment: Ed Cazalet
> Reporter: Edward Cazalet
> Assignee: Toby Considine
> Fix For: wd25
>
>
> Miscellaneous Editorial on WD24
> 476 add "a" before "seller"
> 476 change "the" to "a:
> 477 change "on retailer" to "on a retailer"
> 501 add "is" before "called"
> 525 :insert space after "Table"
> 562 What does "transactioned resources" mean: just say "resource"
> 590 change "transactional" to "transactive"
> 519: change "transactional power" to "for transactive power" which is an amount of power delivered over an interval of time at a constant rate of delivery"
> 617 : change : "request for a single interval" to "request for power delivered over a single interval of time".
> 619 change "transactional" to "transactive" and "power"
> 649 change "replication" to "repetition"
> 651. delete "specific response rates"
> 652 change "transactive purchase of fixed blocks of energy" to "transactions of energy delivered at specified rates over an interval"
> 716: change "the customer" to "both customers and suppliers"
> 719: generally a VEN and not a VTN would participate in in DR program where the VTN is the controller.
> 719. Delete: "distributed energy program" unless it can be defined clearly.
> 739"load and usage projection: is nowhere defined or provided for.
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