[OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (ENERGYINTEROP-445) W24 MiscEditorial

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Toby Considine commented on ENERGYINTEROP-445:
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Modified from Description; all evaluated by WTC. Propose applying all but those with negative instructions in ALL CAPS. 

476 add "a" before "seller" 
tc>> done

476 change "the" to "a" 
tc>> done

477 change "on retailer" to "on a retailer" 
tc>> done

501 move "is" from before parenthetical remark to just before "called" 
tc>> done

525 :insert space after "Table" separating from "5" -- NOTE THIS MAY BE CORRECTED BY THE GENERAL FIX CAPTIONS ITEM 
tc>> done

562 What does "transactioned resources" mean: just say "resource" AGREE. TRANSACTIONED SEEMS TO SUGGEST "a resource that is subject to transactive or event interaction"? 
tc>> pending further conversation

590 change "transactional" to "transactive" 
tc>> done

519: change "transactional power" to "for transactive power" which is an amount of power delivered over an interval of time at a constant rate of delivery" 
tc>> done (assuming this was 619)

617 : change : "request for a single interval" to "request for power delivered over a single interval of time". 
tc>> done

619 change "transactional" to "transactive" and "power" 
tc>> done

649 change "replication" to "repetition" 
tc>> done

651. delete "specific response rates" NOT SURE ABOUT THIS ONE. "SPECIFIED RATES" as for 652? 
tc>> done >> specific Rates

652 change "transactive purchase of fixed blocks of energy" to "transactions of energy delivered at specified rates over an interval" 
tc>> done >> TeMIX defines communications for transactions of energy delivered at specified rates over an specific intervals.

716: change "the customer" to "both customers and suppliers" SHOULD BE "SUPPLIERS AND CONSUMERS" rather than CUSTOMERS AND SUPPLIERS IN MY OPINION 
tc >> We've hashed this out before. We have Buyers and Sellers. THe paragraph before has a call-out to customers because it only makes sense with premioses equipment.

719: generally a VEN and not a VTN would participate in in DR program where the VTN is the controller. THIS WAS LOOKING UP FROM THE VTN AND THE VEN; COULD BE REWORDED BUT "CONTROLLER" IS NOT THE RIGHT WORD. 

719. Delete: "distributed energy program" unless it can be defined clearly. ...OR PROVIDES DISTRIBUTED ENERGY RESOURCES... 

to discussion on 719:
If the VEN participates in a demand response program or provides distributed energy resources, its ESI is the interface to at least one dispatchable resource (Resource), that is, to a single logical entity. A Resource may or may not expose any fine structure.  The Resource terminology and the duality of generation and curtailment are from [EMIX].
Under a demand response program, a Resource is capable of shedding load in response to Demand Response Events, Electricity Price Signals or other system events (e.g. detection of under-frequency). The VTN can query the actual state of a Resource with the EiFeedback service and request ongoing information. The VEN can query the status of the VTN-VEN relationship using the EiStatus service.

Alternatively, a Resource may provide generation in response to similar information. The net effect is the same. 


739"load and usage projection: is nowhere defined or provided for. CORRECT. SUGGEST DELETING. This is likely an application supporting ASHRAE SPC201P 


> W24 Misc Editorial
> ------------------
>
>                 Key: ENERGYINTEROP-445
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/ENERGYINTEROP-445
>             Project: OASIS Energy Interoperation TC
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>          Components: spec
>    Affects Versions: wd24
>         Environment: Ed Cazalet
>            Reporter: Edward Cazalet 
>            Assignee: Toby Considine
>             Fix For: wd25
>
>
> Miscellaneous Editorial on WD24
> 476 add "a" before "seller"
> 476 change "the" to "a:
> 477 change "on retailer" to "on a retailer"
> 501 add "is" before  "called"
> 525 :insert space after "Table"
> 562 What does "transactioned resources" mean:  just say "resource"
> 590 change "transactional" to "transactive"
> 519: change "transactional power" to "for transactive power" which is an amount of power delivered over an interval of time at a constant rate of delivery"
> 617 : change : "request for a single interval" to "request for power delivered over a single interval of time".
> 619  change "transactional" to "transactive" and "power"
> 649 change "replication" to "repetition"
> 651. delete "specific response rates"
> 652 change "transactive purchase of fixed blocks of energy" to "transactions of energy delivered at specified rates over an interval"
> 716: change "the customer" to "both customers and suppliers"
> 719: generally a VEN and not a VTN would participate in in DR program where the VTN is the controller.
> 719.  Delete: "distributed energy program" unless it can be defined clearly.
> 739"load and usage projection: is nowhere defined or provided for.

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