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Subject: Re: [entity-resolution] draft blurb for the vote [was: minutes frommeeting 20050823]
Lauren Wood wrote: > I'll incorporate this into the next version. Can people have any other > changes to me by Monday? I was thinking about this sentence more: "An external identifier that is addressed with the ftp: protocol, for example, is not accessible to a tool that does not support that protocol. " and I think that "identifier" can't be "addressed" in this context. Perhaps the following formulation is better: "An external identifier is addressing resource available with the FTP protocol, for example, and this resource is not accessible to a tool that does not support that protocol. " or alternatively: "An external identifier that uses the ftp: scheme in URL address, for example, is not accessible to a tool that does not support that protocol. " The latter is may be more close to initial intention. But I don't hold strong position on this as I'm for sure the least capable English speaker on TC. Cheers, Jirka -- ------------------------------------------------------------------ Jirka Kosek e-mail: jirka@kosek.cz http://www.kosek.cz ------------------------------------------------------------------ Profesionální školení a poradenství v oblasti technologií XML. Podívejte se na náš nově spuštěný web http://DocBook.cz Podrobný přehled školení http://xmlguru.cz/skoleni/ ------------------------------------------------------------------
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