Public review comments for etmf-v1.0-csprd01: 5.2.1 Metadata Properties

["Eldin Rammell, Rammell Consulting" <eldin.rammell@rammell.com>]

Comment type [editorial]

 

Impact [minor]

 

“If every organization uses different metadata terms (as shown in Figure 12),”. The text should reference ‘Figure 11’ rather than ‘Figure 12’.

 

In this section, the rationale for avoiding use of dissimilar metadata is to “enable efficient global search, reporting, and classification of documents within and outside of an organization”. Given that the primary objective is interoperability and content exchange, it would be more appropriate to cite this as the rationale for avoiding dissimilar metadata terms rather than efficiency and productivity.

 

Four categories of metadata are introduced in this section but the 2^nd and 3^rd are combined into a single section within the bulleted list. It would be clearer for each category to be listed against a separate bullet.

 

Eldin Rammell,

Principal Consultant, Rammell Consulting Ltd.