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--------------090508040602040604080400 Content-Type: text/html; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit <!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN"> <html> <head> <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html;charset=ISO-8859-1"> <title></title> </head> <body text="#000000" bgcolor="#ffffff"> see attached file, HumanMLinCollabtns-JL-edits-12-01-03.doc<br> <br> I reviewed and then made corrections to typos as I encountered them (e.g., misspelled words, spacing, etc.). In several places (particularly my section) I made corrections and inserted additonal citations and added ther correspionding references to Appendix C, References Cited. Please note that as I read through the paper<br> <br> I made a few changes to sentences, to make them more readable (my opinion mostly, but also to correct grammar in afew places), and in several instances made notes (e.g., (NOTE: CITATION and REFERENCE needed here) ) in places where statements are made that I believe need citation and reference. I also added to the end of the section on Data Dictionaries and Thesauri a "see also the related section"" pointer to Sylvia's section on Cultural Descriptions and Linguistics, as those 2 sections discuss independently associated issues of relevance. I also added an example to Sylvia's sentence that focuses discussion on miscommunication, so that the sentence now reads:<br> <br> "An iconic usage in one cultural context can be easily misunderstood as idolatry in another, for example, the Taliban’s ethnocentrically-biased destruction of Buddhist statuary in <st1:country-region><st1:place>Afghanistan</st1:place></st1:country-region> in 2001."<o:p></o:p> <br> <br> For Appendix A, which is the full list of Authors, I suggest appending the Institutional Affiliation to each author's listing. For example, I added a basic affiliation for Rex (Starbourne Communications, Inc., Berkeley, California- Rex, is that correct?), Rob Nixon (Quantum Digital Arts, Inc., Appleton Wisconsin- Rob is that correct?), and for me also. <br> <br> Previously I suggested reorganizing the paper, i.e., moving whole sections around to acchieve better flow, and even though time is fast slipping away at this juncture, if it is still deemed advisable by yhte group to do that, I will be happy to do that after this current round of edits are submitted to Rex and he send s out the prefinal version.<br> <pre class="moz-signature" cols="72">--
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