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Subject: TC Admin comments on Key Management Interoperability Protocol Specification Version 1.4 CSPRD01

Members of the KMIP TC, 

In preparing your content for public review, we encountered the following items that we bring to your attention. 

- Appendix E. Acronyms - the contents are repeated for some reason. First they appear in a table and then they are re-listed again as plan text. 

- Section 3.44 Random Number Generator -  text from the initial template is included at the end of the section. 

"The last numbered section in the specification must be the Conformance section. Conformance Statements/Clauses go here. 
See "Guidelines to Writing Conformance Clauses": 

- Found a few broken internal references that appear in the text of the HTML and PDF as "Error! Reference source not found." - section 6.2 Operation and in Appendix C. Tag Cross-Reference for 'Request Payload' and 'Response Payload.' 

- In the Normative References section, the links for the RSA docs PKCS#1, PKCS#5, PKCS#8, and PKCS#10 are broken. Also (somewhat related) - several of the references are out of date - for example, [RFC5208], which has been obsoleted by RFC 5958.

Let us know if you have any questions. 

Best regards, 


Chet Ensign
Director of Standards Development and TC Administration 
OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society

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