Members of the KMIP TC,
In preparing your content for public review, we encountered the following items that we bring to your attention.
- Appendix E. Acronyms - the contents are repeated for some reason. First they appear in a table and then they are re-listed again as plan text.
- Section 3.44 Random Number Generator - text from the initial template is included at the end of the section.
"The last numbered section in the specification must be the Conformance section. Conformance Statements/Clauses go here.
See "Guidelines to Writing Conformance Clauses":
- Found a few broken internal references that appear in the text of the HTML and PDF as "Error! Reference source not found." - section 6.2 Operation and in Appendix C. Tag Cross-Reference for 'Request Payload' and 'Response Payload.'
- In the Normative References section, the links for the RSA docs PKCS#1, PKCS#5, PKCS#8, and PKCS#10 are broken. Also (somewhat related) - several of the references are out of date - for example, [RFC5208], which has been obsoleted by RFC 5958.
Let us know if you have any questions.