RE: [kmip] Groups - Client Registration Proposal - Examples (2) (Client_Registration_Examples-E.ppt) uploaded

[<Bob.Nixon@Emulex.Com>]

Hi, Denis, here are a few comments:

 - In table 68, several operations are “Allowed to Entity only”. This would appear to be inconsistent with the statement on page 4 of the Examples document, that “Clients can register themselves (self-registration) or other clients using certificates or username/passwords”. A privileged Entity (e.g., software operated by a system admin) that registered a less privileged Entity (e.g., me) would then lose control of it, and the created Entity would gain control. Should this table instead show “owner” as being allowed the sensitive operations? This would require a change to table 112, as well, to allow Entity objects to have an Owner attribute.
 - in line 973, do you mean “SHALL NOT” or in OASIS does “MAY NOT” have a defined meaning that you intend?
 - In table 115, “allowed to all” in the “Policy” column seems irrelevant.  How would the Entity Policy attribute of an Entity apply to anything but the entity itself? The Policy would seem to be either “allowed” or “not allowed”. 
 - Table 113 seems to regress the table numbering.
 - Near the bottom of table 197, it appears that the tag for “Entity Identifier” has been deleted. Is that the intention?

Thanks for carrying this work forward!
   - bob

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Subject: [kmip] Groups - Client Registration Proposal - Examples (2) (Client_Registration_Examples-E.ppt) uploaded

The document named Client Registration Proposal - Examples (2)
(Client_Registration_Examples-E.ppt) has been submitted by Mr. Denis
Pochuev to the OASIS Key Management Interoperability Protocol (KMIP) TC
document repository.

Document Description:
Update and clarifications following a review.

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