RE: [kmip] Groups - KMIP V1.1 Usage Guide wd08 uploaded

Here are the UG comments which I sent to Bob yesterday

Judy

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I see you added a paragraph in to Section 3.33 of the updated UG that addresses the Spec 17 comment (covering the Activation Date case upon Rekey/Renewal). While this section is covering Rekey, etc it actually is more about clarifying the definitions. I wonder if this paragraph about the date issue would fit better into Section 3.17 Using Offset in Re-key and Re-certify Operations

That section of course is covering what to do with the offset but it easily could be adapted to cover this non-offset case.

I also noticed where you added the CRL checking comment -- I really don't think it fits in section 3.33

Would it be possible to just create a new section covering Revocation Checking?

From: kmip@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:kmip@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Robert Griffin
Sent: Wednesday, April 04, 2012 2:39 PM
To: kmip@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [kmip] Groups - KMIP V1.1 Usage Guide wd08 uploaded

Submitter's message
hi -

this is the updated Usage Guide document with the changes from the public review spreadsheet.

regards,

Bob
-- Mr. Robert Griffin

Document Name: KMIP V1.1 Usage Guide wd08

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KMIP V1.1 Usage Guide wd08
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Submitter: Mr. Robert Griffin
Group: OASIS Key Management Interoperability Protocol (KMIP) TC
Folder: Standards
Date submitted: 2012-04-04 11:38:59

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