Members of the LegalDocML TC,
In preparing your draft for publication, we noted the following items that you may wish to address.
- In the table in section 6.2, Subdivision section, two of the cells under 'EU tradition' have footnote superscript numbers but no actual footnotes. In the PDF document, they do nothing. In the HTML, they jump the reader to the end of the document. You may want to remove the footnote markers.
- Please check the reference to [RFC2119] in section 1.1 in your document. I believe the link was broken, producing an "Error! Reference source not found." In publishing, we changed it to plain text.
- We noted that the items listed in Normative and Non-Normative references (e.g. [ISO3166]) are never referenced in the document itself. Typically the only reason to have the references collected in your document is because they are referred to from your document. If your spec doesn't actually refer readers to, for example, "International Resource Identifiers as per RFC 3987" then there seems to be no need to list them. In particular, [AkomaNtosoNaming-v1.0] can simply be listed on the front page in the "Related work" section.
Also, for those that you do choose to keep, the normative references [ISO3166], [ISO639-2], and [XML-SCHEMA] don't have actual hyperlinks - just blue text of a link.
Please let us know if you have any questions on these.
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Chet Ensign
Director of Standards Development and TC Administration
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