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Subject: Comments on WebServices spec


Hi,

A few mostly editorial comments on the Web Services SIP spec:

(line # from PDF version)

Section 1.2 - would be good to have reference marks like [XMLENC]
here, as well as in each of the subsections where those other
specifications are discussed. Also, add these reference marks in 1.2.1
through 1.2.5, similar to 1.2.6 and below.

Section 1.2.6 - Should mention the exception of the requirements for
use of the WS-I Attachments Profile 1.0 and the W3C Simple SOAP
Binding Profile 1.0, as described in Section 1.2.7.

179 - [ECF 4.0] reference format is wrong; should be like:
Electronic Court Filing Version 4.01.  08 February 2011. OASIS
Committee Specification Public Review Draft.
http://docs.oasis-open.org/legalxml-courtfiling/specs/ecf/v4.01/ecf-v4.01-spec/csprd01/ecf-v4.01-spec-csprd01.doc
 (see "Citation format" in the document.)

194 - [RFC2616] remove period after "et"

208 - [SOAP MTOM 1.0] remove extra "i" in Mischkinsky (although Jeff
is very alert and you might think he has an extra eye...) (Not good to
anger your Board of Directors  ;^)  )

215 - [WS-I BP1.1] remove extra "M. Nottingham" (although Mark's a great guy)

216 - insert period after P

219 - [WS-I BSP1.1] replace (Working Group Approval Draft) with (Final Material)

221 - [WS-RM 1.0] Use new citation for this - it is now OASIS Standaard

223 - [XML 1.0] insert "et al." after T. Bray  (Eve Maler and the
others would be unhappy)

Nice work on the two specifications.. glad to see them progressing and
getting public review!

Regards,
Paul  (as Individual OASIS Member)


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