Re: [legalxml-econtracts] Use case template - draft use case fornegotiated contract documents

[Jason Harrop <jharrop@speedlegal.com>]

Thanks Peter for doing the negotiated contract documents use case.

It captures the essence of the use case well.

I agree that it would be better to collaborate on the use cases to avoid 
duplication.

To that end, I'm attaching your document with some minor comments for 
your consideration, in the form of redlined additions.

cheers,

Jason


Peter Meyer wrote:
> Hi folks,
> 
> I attach a rather long use case I prepared with the template sent on Friday.
> I regret that this document is very much longer than I envisaged. I put it
> forward because I think it raises a lot of issues we need to resolve in our
> requirements process. Hopefully it will help us refine the use case
> template.
> 
> There are a couple of approaches we could take to preparation of the use
> cases.
> One approach would be to encourage as many as people want to contribute.
> Another would be to avoid duplication by creating a few only and opening
> them up to contributions to others. I am inclined to the second approach. In
> that spirit, I invite anyone to contribute to my draft with both alternative
> or supporting points. There are many areas where my use case may be
> controversial. I could well be wrong on a number of points.
> 
> If the use cases allow us to identify the key situations we need to consider
> in our work and reach a common understanding of how relevant transactions
> are undertaken, they will help us to move forward.
> 
> I look forward to receiving comments on the draft use case template send on
> Friday and on this draft use case.
> 
> regards
> Peter
> 
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