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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (MQTT-26) Typographical improvements to section 2.1.1 of WD04

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Date: Sun, 16 Jun 2013 14:29:43 -0400 (EDT)

Typographical improvements to section 2.1.1 of WD04
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                 Key: MQTT-26
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-26
             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
          Issue Type: Improvement
          Components: edits
            Reporter: Peter Niblett
            Priority: Minor


1. Second sentence says "The enumerations for this version of the protocol are shown...".  This reads a bit strangely
a) I would say either "enumeration" or "values", not "enumerations"
b) It's not necessary to say "this version of the protocol"

2. Typo in PUBREC (Etiter)

3.  Inconsistent capitalisation of words in the Description column. I favour having capitals only on the first word of each description.

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