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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (MQTT-26) Typographical improvements to section 2.1.1 of WD04
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-26?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=34117#action_34117 ] Rahul Gupta commented on MQTT-26: --------------------------------- In WD-07 -------------- 1) line 269 - The enumeration for MQTT Control packet types is shown in the table below. 2) Typo is fixed 3) fixed capitalisation in descreption column > Typographical improvements to section 2.1.1 of WD04 > --------------------------------------------------- > > Key: MQTT-26 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-26 > Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC > Issue Type: Improvement > Components: edits > Reporter: Peter Niblett > Assignee: Rahul Gupta > Priority: Minor > > 1. Second sentence says "The enumerations for this version of the protocol are shown...". This reads a bit strangely > a) I would say either "enumeration" or "values", not "enumerations" > b) It's not necessary to say "this version of the protocol" > 2. Typo in PUBREC (Etiter) > 3. Inconsistent capitalisation of words in the Description column. I favour having capitals only on the first word of each description. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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