[OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (MQTT-36) Editorial comments on Connect Payload

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Rahul Gupta commented on MQTT-36:
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Removed the Non Normative comment in WD-08.


> Editorial comments on Connect Payload
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>
>                 Key: MQTT-36
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-36
>             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: edits
>            Reporter: Peter Niblett
>            Assignee: Rahul Gupta
>            Priority: Trivial
>
> 1. I know we provide our definition of "UTF-8 encoded strings in 2.1.3, however readers of the first para of 3.13 (line 667) might not realise this. We should either say "length-prefixed UTF-8 encoded strings" or "UTF-8 encoded strings as defined in 2.1.3". 
> 2. Line 676 says (when talking about the Client Identifier) "It is the key in handling Message Identifiers for messages with QoS levels 1 and 2". The phrase "key in handling" looks a bit odd,  and in any case the Client Id is used as a key to all state held on the server for the client, not just some kind of scoping construct for message Ids.
> 3. Line 677 2 instances of unicode should be Unicode
> 4. Line 684 says "The Client Identifier might have been presented to the client implementation as a Unicode string" and then goes on to talk about surrogate characters.  Surrogate characters are not valid Unicode, so can't appear in a Unicode string.  What you should have said is "The Client Identifier might have been presented to the client implementation as a UTF-16 encoded string [RFC2781]" 

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