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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (MQTT-133) Edits on PRD1 chapter 5

Edits on PRD1 chapter 5

                 Key: MQTT-133
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-133
             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
          Issue Type: Bug
          Components: edits
            Reporter: Peter Niblett

1. Line 1497 "NIST Crper Security Framework " should be "NIST Cyber Security Framework "

2. There are several places where ] is followed by an extra unneeded space. such as 1486, 1497, 1552, 1604

3. Unnecessary comma after e.g. in line 1486

4. Sections,, all have sentences without verbs in them 

5. Line 1509 uses single quotes, but 1514 uses double quotes. I think we've used double quotes elsewhere in the document.

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