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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (MQTT-165) 2.1.2.1 Dup
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-165?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ] Richard Coppen updated MQTT-165: -------------------------------- Assignee: Peter Niblett Affects Version/s: 3.1.1 Component/s: edits Peter, you've mentioned that you felt this text was confusing previously - could you take a look at it ? > 2.1.2.1 Dup > ----------- > > Key: MQTT-165 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-165 > Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC > Issue Type: Bug > Components: edits > Affects Versions: 3.1.1 > Environment: Grammar > Reporter: Patrick Durusau > Assignee: Peter Niblett > Priority: Trivial > > 2.1.2.1 Dup reads in part: > ***** > If Dup is 0 then the flow is the first occasion that the Client or Server has attempted to send the MQTT PUBLISH Packet. > .... > The Dup flag MUST be set to 1 by the Client or Server when it attempts to re-deliver a PUBLISH Packet > ***** > For the first sentence, "...sent the MQTT PUBLISH Packet." should read: "...send a MQTT PUBLISH Packet." Yes? > That is the same usage you see in the second sentence. > The difference being that "a MQTT..." applies to any MQTT... whereas "the MQTT..." means some packet in particular. > I haven't scanned to the document for all uses of the definite article and doubt I will have time. Just a word to alert you to the issue, which you already handle correctly in many other cases. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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